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I was pleasantly surprised to find this little gem of a story, again.

I really like the path the plot has taken.

Fabulous! Plot and story has been added without loosing the humour. I'm really looking forward to updates to see where this is going.

As a resident I can say the floods are over and you should come back to this wonderful tale. I love all the characters, and you have done Sesshoumaru so well. I also love Fortune and Erin

What to say about this story? Where to begin? It is amazing. I have laughed my ass off and loved every minute of it. The trio of Sesshomaru, Fortune and Erin is so perfect in such an odd way that I have been glued to the screen for hours. Your dark wit is a true gift, and I am so happy that you have chosen to share it with us. You are doing a wonderful job and now I am now left to anxiously await the next installment. Poor Erin must be terrified, but the one's who should be trembling in fear are her captors, for they shall suffer the wrath of one pissed off taiyoukai! Thanks for the read~

Rinseternalsoul

I really love this story. Fortune is so crazy, I stay laughing off of his ridiculous jokes. I can't wait to read more, they have to get Erin back!! Please, please, please update soon!! ^_~

This is the singularly most facinating off all the recent fanfics written. And I read a lot of them. No one ever seems to care what Sesshoumaru might do 'in the future' without Kagome to help him. And I also think it goes without saying that he had to have lived that long. I mean, can anyone really see him dying, or being killed? And your plot is the most original plot on any fansite.

I was thinking about Fortune's 'changes', and you know, it wouldn't surprise me one bit if Sesshoumaru's "superior youkai blood" changed many qualities in the vampire... I don't think his species will be changed per se, but I do believe that he'll be gaining some demonic traits.

With the information given about Fortune's past, I was wondering how old he is. He has enough play in him to be fairly young, but then sometimes he's so serious. My guess would be somewhere around seventy-five, what with Charlotte being his niece. But then, sometimes he could almost pass for two-hundred. Either way, he's a very believable original character.

Oh, and another thing occured to me: At the beginning, I kept wondering why Sesshoumaru never thought to contact Kagome if he was bored, but then I realized that he might not ever have known that the 'Inuyasha's wench' was from the future. I mean, its not like the little group she traveled with ever mentioned her odd capabilites during a fight. That would have been stupid.

Ah, but I'm rambling now, aren't I? Okay, I'm done. Update as soon as you can.

Okay, I am thoroughly enjoying this bad boy.

My...my but this is getting intriguing AND good, also it was longer than most chapters...veddy good!!! Now you're starting to raise questions....with the constant mentioning of Rin and Jaken are you going to tells us what happened to them in the past?

You know for a second I thought you had killed Erin's sister, because Fortune had thought she smelled similar to Erin. But, anyway, it's GOOD to read a Sesshoumaru story that is not the norm...

I think Fortune is a Sex God!

Yes, that is all I can say. Yes. This chapter has made me the happiest little reviewer you have ever seen. You did a really good job with thinking this one out. I loved the drunk-idy scene, and the after effects... it reminded me of college parties... except for with Fortune and Sesshomaru. I am loving the way your attention is focusing on the little missmatched trio. You give them all conflicts that are believable... You brought Fortune and Erin to life as whole and complete characters. You did it without driving Sesshomaru to bouts of crazy out of characterness either! In fact I love the way you portray Sesshomaru. He is very very true to the original.

I cannot wait to see what exactly is changing with Fortune! Excellent plot point... it seems to tie together and make it story like and less wandering fun.

Erin was kidnapped? By vampires... smiling hysterically... its so cliche but it works so well! I guess sometimes the best stuff is the stuff that is tried and true... and kidnapping is one of those tried and trues! I can't wait to see what you are going to do with it.

happily reading
botticelliangel

I like it. It's very different from any other IY fanfic I've read. Sess is one of my favorite characters, and with all those years with Rin, and after Rin to mellow him a bit, I can definately see him being the way you portray him. Alas, I don't think I give Fortune's name the right pronunciation when I read it, but you'll forgive me that, won't you? I got to the end of what you had posted and really wanted another chapter. I hope you update soon! Thanks for the great read!

lol well i know what you mean about the parinoia for the 'silent thumbs down' as you called it! But i'm here to review ^-^. The beginning of this chapter struck me as a little shaky this time. I think its because you were in third person but you kept switching focus of thought from Fortune (who was as always hilarious. I mean really noticing that girls group by hair color lol!) to the girl he stalks. it was almost like you were undecided on who's POV you wanted to go with the victim or the hunter... Other than that the chapter was excelent. Loved the interaction when Fortune gave Erin the ring. I thought Sesshomaru's little bout of... dare i say jealousy?... was perfect. Thanks for the compliments ^-^ i just try to help out.
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