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i like this story hurry and finish it make it so thay do bacome mates and kagome has a little baby girl and it is inuyasha's baby make it longer this time though plz and thank you and add 2 more pages first page is when kagome has the baby and stays there with inuyasha sango miroku and shippo doin't make it with kikio in it and the second page is when kagome and inuyasha go to kagome's time and showe the baby to kagome's mother and souta and don't forget there grampa and they don't go back to the fuderal era until there daughter is a couple of days older and make sure and if there is any kikio in it make it that inuyasha kills kikio cause kikio tries to kill kagome and there daughter and there daughters name could be kanna and she has purple eyes with sparkles and white doggy ears like inuyasha but instead of white hear black hair and she has her mom's smile and if you can one more page that is not short but not long either that they collect all of the shards and sango shippo and miroku can go into kagome's time and miroku and sango have a little baby girl named kaugra and she looks exacly like sango and when kaugra and kanna grow up they become best friends like there mom and sango and kagome and inuyaha and miroku and sango show kanna and kaugra the fetural era and kanna and kaugra don't like it until they meat two boys named kohaku and kouga who kanna and kaugra fall in love with until kagome inuyasha and sango miroku find out that kohaku and koga are naruka and kikio's kids and inuyasha kagome sango and miroku forbid kanna and kaugra from ever seeing the guys ever agian so they go back to kagome's time where shippo kirarastayed back to protect souta cause kagome and inuyasha sence that there is going to be danger but nothing ends up happeningh and when they get back to where kagome inuyasha sango miroku shippo kirara kanna and kaugra live and they all live happiley ever

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I love this story!!! Make chapter two quick!!!! Pwease!!!!

That was awesome keep going please I reviewed please keep going

AWWW!!! that was cute. i like the friends bit, never really read anything that focused on inu being ::gasp:: open with Kagome. LOL. great story, looking forward to seeing how the group just can't leave them alone. thank god kikyo has...or has she??? LOL. keep it up!!!

aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so fluffy lol in other words it was good and i hope that u write another chapter and get those little sneeks out of the bushes lol