rate_review Reviews

hi, I enjoyed this one too, I like that you showed the thought process! and don't except flames your writing is pretty good and I liked you plot.

a lot people on this site is just not open minded to different pairings. Personally I don't care as long as the story makes sense and is well written good job

I loved it, Hojo certainly deserved it, and so did she. It was beautiful.

Great!!! 'Bout time Hojo got some... ne? This was pretty good and the first I've ever read about Hojo and Kagome. I hope you plan on writing a second one... and probably a third one... it all depends on you, of course. GREAT JOB...

Hey sweetie! I love the story! I paid good attention to the tense and for errors and that sort of thing so I could give you a good constructive review instead of the typical "Oh, I love it" one. I didn't notice tense swapping, you seemed to do a good job with that. You do have some typo's and some words that spellcheck fixed wrong in there, so you may want to do another read through to clean those up. I felt the transition from being sad about IY to realizing she loved Hojo to kissing him was a little too quick. I LOVE the pairing. It is about time that other pairings get to shine. IY/Kago; Sess/Kago; Miro/Sang; these pairings are overdone, and although I do like cannon, I want to read something different, I am so bored with InuYasha and InuYasha fanfiction that it is nice to read fics that are different. I like that you explain why Kagome would go for Hojo and they are logical reasons. If you can't be with the one you love, love the one you're with. heh All in all I really like this fic, good job.

Great for your muse she did a wonderful job... hope to read more Hojo fics in the future

haha i loved it. really good writing :)
*five stars and a cookie*

GO HOJO!!! IS YOUR B'DAY!!! YEAH!!!! HOJO GOT SOME!!!! ^___^

Good Fic!