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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That cliffy was evil!, brilliant, but evil. I liked the chapter, then end was very well done as far as pacing and such. The flow is still very good, nothing seemed rushed (not even Sess and Kagome wanting to jump each other in the middle of the dance floor). Can't wait for the next chapter!
Kytari
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Kytari
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This part two is as good as hell know no bounds i like it. wish that u updeat more like u did with part one other then that keep up the good work.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OWE MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!tHIS IS GETTING GOOD!!!!!!><<3jUST AS GOOD AS THE FIRST!!!!yOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!::PRAISE::=^.^=~Amanda-chan
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah missy, we have to talk! I am really distressed with the way you left this chapter. See what you just did was beyond cruel punishment. Now don't get me wrong, I write too and I do cliffies too... but I don't like them done to me, damnit! And I don't care if that doesn't sound logical... I know it's not but I ask that you go with me anyway on this ^_^
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See there I go babbling again. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the chapter and that I can't wait to see what you have happen next. I'd really like to see the children's reactions to him. I've got the feeling that both Shippo and Rin would take to him right away, especially Rin considering her dream - then again you're the author of this one and I'm not, lol. Don't even get me started in on Kagome's reaction to being pregnant. Though as much as I want to see our happy little family again, I canNOT wait to see Inuyasha's reaction to remembering and seeing his brother again. So many possibilites you've got going on here... oh oh will Kagome wanna smack Jaken around? I ask that you let Kagome hit Jaken at least once, even though Sess has really taken care of him. I just think it'd be funny - if you could fit that in there... - giggles -
More Soon Now Damnit! ^_~
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See there I go babbling again. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the chapter and that I can't wait to see what you have happen next. I'd really like to see the children's reactions to him. I've got the feeling that both Shippo and Rin would take to him right away, especially Rin considering her dream - then again you're the author of this one and I'm not, lol. Don't even get me started in on Kagome's reaction to being pregnant. Though as much as I want to see our happy little family again, I canNOT wait to see Inuyasha's reaction to remembering and seeing his brother again. So many possibilites you've got going on here... oh oh will Kagome wanna smack Jaken around? I ask that you let Kagome hit Jaken at least once, even though Sess has really taken care of him. I just think it'd be funny - if you could fit that in there... - giggles -
More Soon Now Damnit! ^_~
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was friggin awesome! Such intense kissing WOOT^__~ I liked how you had her regain SOME of her memory, makes things a wee bit more interesting, even though this story is great as it is^^Yay she's going to find out that she's pregnant, that should be a shocker!! Please update soon and keep up the good work as always^__^!!!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's really good. Please keep it coming. I can't wait for the next one. ^.^
~Amanda
~Amanda
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Ok, enthusiasm about your stories is understatement of the year! I check on this site everyday to see if you've updated! You have to be my all time FAVE writer on AFF.net! I think you should continue to do Ses/Kag stories since you're so great at it. Anyway, I'm waiting for your next chappie!
-RixGrl
-RixGrl
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so awsome finally I hope she keeps her mermory that was great I cried when she finally got it back. please let her keep it.
well great fic chappie as all ways please update soon
Arry
well great fic chappie as all ways please update soon
Arry
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello your a great writer! when chp.8 coming?
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it didnt really matter that u sped it up a bit
it is a great story and i cant wait for you to put up the next chapter!!!
i wonder how the kids are going to react though...
anyways you are a great writter and i hope to read plenty more of your stories!!!
GREAT JOB!!!!
it is a great story and i cant wait for you to put up the next chapter!!!
i wonder how the kids are going to react though...
anyways you are a great writter and i hope to read plenty more of your stories!!!
GREAT JOB!!!!