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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. That was awesome. That lemon was teh awesomeness, and I love the ending. *jumps around* It's amazing how you were able to pull get that done in such a short period of time. *worships* I will be awaiting the next chapter!!! Keep up the great job!!!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.............................GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT oh yeaaaaaaaaaaa did i mention it was .......................GREAT!!! oh my gosh i mean....damn woman! that was as i said in the email...EXPLOSIVE!! bludy hell *blushes darkly* i mean i..i.ii.i..i..i....i..i duno wat to say lmao it was great and u win the challenge.......ur present is.......*grins* hmm wat shall it be? well i was thinking about making a one/shot wit u and sesshoumaru?? maybe? ah wat eva u choose! so until next time
bye bye nee-chan
bye bye nee-chan
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first off missy - you took way too long and there was not nearly enough of it! lol When I couldn't scroll down anymore, I nearly cried. Anyway, what was there was great, if I wasn't hooked before I am now. I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction to everything when she wakes up, then of course there are the others. Especially Rin and Shippo, I'm curious as to how and if all their memories will return. You've got a lot of unanswered questions going on here: I love it!
Second, YAY FOR THE BEAT DOWN OF JAKEN! I am so happy you decided to let Kagome beat Jaken down and in my honor too... I am just so flattered, lol ^-^
I hope the next chapter comes to you a lot easier and faster, I can't wait to see what you have occur next!
Second, YAY FOR THE BEAT DOWN OF JAKEN! I am so happy you decided to let Kagome beat Jaken down and in my honor too... I am just so flattered, lol ^-^
I hope the next chapter comes to you a lot easier and faster, I can't wait to see what you have occur next!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviewed on the other site but hey whats two love the lemon too very sexy lol
update soon
Arry
update soon
Arry
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the store so far and i you were to stop the story here well.....to say the least i my self would be devastated(i think i spelled that right) at any rate really love the story please keep going.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. The child sounds so cute! You certainly do know how to string people along and keep them interested in the story, I admire that. Good luck with the citrus war, I haven't read anything by the other author, but I'm sure you will do just fine. *fans herself* Looking forward to the next chapter!
Kytari =^_^=
Kytari =^_^=
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgosh that last chapter was dirty...u just had to end it right when it started to get good. lol neway, this story is awesome keep up the great work...i noe it might seem stressful, but hey at least there are people out there that really enjoy it. hopefully (like u said) the other chapters will come easier. until then good luck!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't give reviews, but it would just about kill me if you stopped writing this story beacause you didn't have proper motivation. So, I hope this review will reach your creative heart and you'd continue for me. Hope you'll update soon. Till then i wait with bated breath, doomed to roam the web searching for a story of your caliber. Not an easy task, if I may. There, how's that for drama?
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that has got to be your best lemon yet^^ I love the dream sequence you put at the end, that was very clever and a very well thought out way of having her remember everything. It was also cute that her unborn son was showing her the way. Please update soon (I hope your headache gets better><) and keep up the good work^__^!!!