AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for The Fires of My Heart

by CerealKiller

person labelle
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it ok....(pokes own muse with stick) ....noooooo it died
person Wolf
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this one as well as the first. Both are a image of words. as i read them i could imagine what the scenes looked like. please keep up the good job and please update soon.
person naraku_lover
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Good!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! Update SOON!!!!!!!!!!
person Jinx
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that's all I can say...wow...This is such a good start to your story! You've already got me in suspense...Ok, I know you started this ages ago, but I'll review every single chapter until I'm up to date! :) I loved the other story, Hell Holds No Bounds. That was beautiful, it really was! And I loved the fight scene!! You've really got a talent for writing and I'm hoping to see more of your works soon!! :D Sigh...You've really inspired me to add one of my own stories here...only thing is, when I try, I can't...it says something about edding some first chapter application/octet-stream whatever. T_T Sigh...got any tips on what I'm doing wrong?? :( Well anyways, hehe, just had to ask someone about it...I'm lost. Anyways, look out for my reviews! You'll hopefully get all of them within tonight!! :D Happy writing!!

JINX
person The Bunny Under Your Bed
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Eye twitches*

I love it! You MUST continue! Please!!

- --The Bunny Under Your Bed
person TricksterGoddess
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eekers... My GOD that freakin sucks! Yea, I was wondering what had happened to you! I will stay patient, and I don't believe in hate mail.. so yea. My computer is full of viruses at home, so I guess I'm lucky for attempting to long on at school, against the rules of course, BUAHAHAHA. Stupid Librarians.. w/e. So Yea, hopefully I'll have a new anti-virus program by then and most likely read your chapter.. if it comes out^^ Good Luck otherwise^__^
person fluffylover1978
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS EXCELLENT...PLEASE UPDATE SOON.....I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE CREATED THIS, IT MAKES ME WANT TO SCREAM AND CRY AT THE SAME TIME....KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK THAT YOU DO.....
person zxna21
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i read both storys in one day and im totaly hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
thank-u
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lady Serenity
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must finish the story, it is to damn good to end there!!!