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for Revealed Desires

by loviasilverleaf

person mizukimarr910
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uugghh i could die happy now that was the best i've ever read and i read all the time that was the most intense scene i've ever read i swear. please keep writing and update again soon.

thanxmizukimarr910
person TC
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME !
person Zodiac cat gurl
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I gotta go find my boyfriend or im gonna be in pain for teh rest of the day! *picks up phone & calls micheal* hey baby, i need u now....please.....*sighs sexily* im sooo gonna have to be a member of this site
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! that was so sweet at the end. update soon!!
person kiotana
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah....sweet lemons!
great fic! that was sweet!
person inuyasha fan 2005
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was so great, well done. loved the lemon and the whole was just wow. well done.
person ME
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good so far and i thought the only thing u could improve is ur spelling but thats it so UPDATE SOON!