rate_review Reviews

a mess that was pretty nice

Really funny! Please, update soon and don't forget the jokes!

I've been meaning to read this story and really I regret not reading it from the beginning. It was wonderful! Well written and the comedy was perfect. Now there's one thing I have been wondering, is there going to be a lemon between Kouga and Miroku? Because this pairing is very uncommon. I will be waiting for your next update. C ya!

Awesome update for this story I really liked it alot. This story is so funny, I love it.
Okay that was funny what inu told miroku even though it was kinda creepy, lol. I've never read
this couple before, will they end up together at the end? I can't wait to read more.
please update soon.
TTFN^-^

oh yeah, updates will DEFINATELY be soon or im coming for you. I MEAN IT!!! YOUR ASS IS GRASS IF YOU DONT UPDATE SONN!! *sniff* please

hm, alright let's see. i guess you should know, when it comes to erotica, i ain't good; the things that drive a character, that's what i think i'm good at, anyway. i like the dream sequence, our subconscious mind always knows more than we give it credit. as i picture this story so far, i think when they do finally meet, koga will be angry and miroku will be all embarassed and stuff. then they realize the truth about themselves and each other. (the stuff they've been repressing, that is) that openness then leads to the intimacy. er, well, i'm betting that's not what you asked for ...i meant well, honest! excellent story so far, and not just the comedic bits either (although the imagery was priceless) the interactions with the characters (esp. ginta, hak and koga) were also very good. looking forward to more stuff!

xD awsome story! : 3 one of the best kouga miroku fics i've read. . hell it is the best. . .... >.< mmnn my two favioret charecters written so well . . yum!

lol!!! yey! this started out as a funny lil ficlet, but now it's a real story! and i'm so excited for the next chapter!!!! also, cute title! ;)

HAHAHAHAHA! Whoo! God that was good! Please up-date soon!

Poor Kouga (snort...hehe...hahahahahahahaha!), these chapters keep getting better and better. I really like the dream he had. Keep up the good laughs.

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