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for Brother of Mine

by DarkRoseBlood

person Vex
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fuck, that was hot.
person sacredfire
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot!! You should write more SesshoumaruxInuyasha fics!!!
person m
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written. Do you know I immediately went to check if there was a sequel? Not much more to say, good work.
person trystan
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude please continue this story it rocks!!
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! This is such an awsome story! I loved it! I hope you are planning on writing more like this!
person kinky lurker
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is really good and really hot. however, i would recommend some attention to tense chages. you went from the presnt to past and it disturbed the story's flow a little, but it was still wonderfully hot! i loved it! good job, keep it up!
person Weathered
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was hot!! Sesshoumaru was awesome in this story, and you got him in character perfectly. A+ my friend, A+
person polka dot
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definite control freak. but it was interesting, quite bloody though
person Esther
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
" ...Because you, my younger brother, tear at me. You shred me. Your worthless blood, you glittering amber eyes, your pale skin that shines beneath the moon, which glares down at me with pallid brilliance tonight.
You taunt me with that smirk of yours. A glinting fang pokes out over you bottom lip. Your smooth lips of which I wish to devour beneath my own, little brother. "

This is sorrow,this is lust,this is scorn,this is sinful; sinful and irresistible desire...
Your words are truly beautiful and inspiring,my friend.
person blacknoise
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So...IN...Character...! *goodstoryorgasm* Jesus. Someone finally got it right. Sesshoumaru the sick bastard :P so perfect... so, SO right. Finally, a good writer in this festering pit of 12-year-old wannabe smut artists..