rate_review Reviews

cute, looks like it will be a fun fic...

I forgot to say some things... you will have to make it longer, and put more detail in about the plot instead of who everyone is. If people are reading fanfiction, they're going to know at least a little bit about the anime/manga. Everyone loves a good cliffhanger, but your story just stopped. You put in a cliff hanger before you said what you were writing about. Thins is not meant to be a flame...Hope this helps.