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for Moonless Night

by Redknight

person Torph
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a pretty good story so far, an interesting plot. I'll be keeping on eye out for more of your stories, I'm sure I won't be disappointed. However, I do ask that you consider letting me edit out the spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors out of your stories, for better readability. My e-mail is Torapha@yahoo.com, if you want me to help, just send an e-mail.
person Karen
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story please make another one I want to see how they will react I mean their freinds I also want to see how many children they will have.
person kiotana
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!! puppy's!!!!!!
i want puppy's!!!!!
person T.K.
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story i have read so far. Well update soon!!
person grafzahl
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i´ll hope you go on with your storry. So therefor i bookmarked it and hope to find a new chapter soon :-)
person TC
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME !!
person ChibiSamuraiX
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWW!!!! this is sooo sweeeett!!! I loved it so much!! She's pregnant too!!! I'm happy that you added this chapter. Hope you add another one as good as this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kagome950
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Are you going to continue it?
person irish
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was mushy you should keep going and not leave it there.
person mizukimarr910
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great please write more. i still think that he should have left his mark on her (heehee that's my favorite part!!) oh well maybe in another story. i still loved this not many people have them together when inuyasha's a human so it's cool and different. plese keep writing and update agian soon.

thanx mizukimarr910