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You make me wanna cry with this one :(...Excellent chapter! Thats sounds kinda wrong after saying that I was gonna cry...well anyway, great chapter, I figured His "Job" might have somthing to do with the death of his baby but I didn't know for sure...the BIG question now is.....WHY ON EARTH DID HE GO BACK TO WORKING FOR NARAKU????ooooo this is gonna be good, I can tell! The lemon was tastefully done, and the way Inuyasha tried to protect Kagome was perfect, sad, very very sad, but it worked out really well how you wrote it. Oh and you didn't cause me any trouble, after reading those chapters so many times, at least I have a good inkling as to whats has happend and what is going to happen! Anyway keep up the great work!

wow. so...that's what happened. i had a feeling that InuYasha went after Naraku and had inadvertantly brought about the death of thier son. i can understand both of thier pain but unfortinuatly, in Kagome's place, she needs to understand that it wasn't InuYasha's fault for the death of their son. i can't believe she would blame him. if she hadn't gone to Naraku.... ::sigh:: VERY well done. i love the characters you have put together for the two. i don't know, though, how InuYasha could go back to working for Naraku after that. how he...why he would... ::sigh:: he should have gotten her out that day...he should have known better. man, this is to good. i'm sitting in my seat just about screaming, "run you baka!" very good story, still very touching. man i love it!!!!

wow. so...that's what happened. i had a feeling that InuYasha went after Naraku and had inadvertantly brought about the death of thier son. i can understand both of thier pain but unfortinuatly, in Kagome's place, she needs to understand that it wasn't InuYasha's fault for the death of their son. i can't believe she would blame him. if she hadn't gone to Naraku.... ::sigh:: VERY well done. i love the characters you have put together for the two. i don't know, though, how InuYasha could go back to working for Naraku after that. how he...why he would... ::sigh:: he should have gotten her out that day...he should have known better. man, this is to good. i'm sitting in my seat just about screaming, "run you baka!" very good story, still very touching. man i love it!!!!

Man, this is better than Momento. But I'm still saying that the happy ending is nigh. IT BETTER BE!


Or at least Naraku's death.

Good chapter. That answered a lot of my questions thank you. I just hope that there is still a little bit more in the meeting between Kagome and Inuyasha. Sorry I don't know how to use bold and italics so I can't help you in that department. Keep writing this story please it is really good. Update soon!!!

:Blink: :Blink: Okay that was interesting, but a little confusing, hold on let me read the chapters again.........(cheesy elevator music) .....okay I am back, now for my thoughts....:blink: :blink: .....nope lost them again, hold I will re-read the chapters again.......(once again with the cheesy elevator music...oh hey that one is nice!..)... Okay now I am back! It only took 3 tries but I think I got the jist of it. Even though I found it to be a little difficult to read I like the overall effect of it. I haven't see a story like this one, and the plot is some what refreshing. I definatly think that you shouldn't change the way you have the story set-up. I like the way it makes you think about what is going on, what is going to happen, what you know already happend, and all the other good stuff in between. The change with the times and all that makes the story more interesting and keeps "me" the reader, hooked! I definatly can't wait to see what you have planned for this story and keep up the excellent writing!

Kiwi

....don't know if anyone would like it??? how could they not??? damn, you have me on the edge of my seat!!!! i want to know what he does! (though i have a good feeling i know) and what happened to the baby (again, i think i got it) but damn, this is real good! its dark, which isn't always bad, and realistic (in many ways). i can't wait to see what you do wtih this. the story really is good, don't think it isn't!

For bold - simply put before the words you wish to bold and then put a afterwards. Italics - Be sure to close them out or the whole page will be in bold and italic. Love the story by the way.

Ghettoness....let's try this again. For bold - < b > before the words you want to bold (excluding the spacing) and a < / b > afterwards. For italics, simply switch the b with an i.

WOW. ...side note...i'm listening to some type of relaxation music that is thunderstorms and really heavy rain, and reading your story to it has sent nothing but absolute chills up my spine and tears to my eyes. i can jsut about feel my heart breaking for those two. an assassin, huh? wow...i really didn't see that one coming. i had a feeling he was killing people (obviously) but wasn't sure if it was street fighting or orgainzed crime. interesting. just....wow. i can't imagine what Naraku did to kagome to make her lose the baby...but i can only guess. and that makes me cry.... great story, as always, and i really can't wait to see what you do. this isn't the sappy pretty everyone is freakin happy story that most people write. as always, you have created real to life characters and given them a giant rock and hard place for them to wedge themselves between.

how to use bold and italics, huh? uhh....welllll....okay. it's all HTML code. to use a bold faced work you need two brackets <> and in the middle put a B. when you are done with it, do the brackets with after the slash, add a B. i can't transpose code cause it won't work but without the spaces, it would be like < B > insert word and the same for Itallics but use an I. that should work for you.

not much else to say really. wonderful chapter, great story. you have me so hooked that it is not even funny! i feel so bad for that couple; what trauma for thier fragile lives. man...that sucks. great story!!!!!!!