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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, great fic, sad but so very good. i'm on the edge of my seat and i gotta know the final chapter and i have to know what happends. so please please update soon!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this chapter definatly answered a few of my questions :)...BUT then you go and leave a nasty little cliffhanger like that and I am stuck with more QUESTIONS!!!! I am just teasing. I actually like the cliffhangers because it makes me imagine all the different possibilities of what could happen. It's a nasty little habit of mine. I definatly enjoyed the scence where the doctor and Inuyasha were talking. I really felt that the way you wrote the scene was amazing. I felt like I could really feel his pain :(.. so so sad. Now all you need to do is make Inuyasha kill Naraku and him and Kagome have a happy happy life and another baby! (ok ok so its just how I want the end to go, and maybe...hopefully...i am whishing on stars here....that this little cliffy just might mean that she is pregnant again?? :crosses fingers:...) I know I know whisful thinking. Anyway congratulations on another excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! oooh it´s so cool you updated this story so quickly! -*gg*- .. well .. this was again a great chapter, just as i suspected it would be^^ aaand there was such an evil cliffie! but i can´t wait to read about their first kiss and what the hell is going on... so please -*go on my knees*- pls pls pls update soon!!! :-)
oh i think such a story needs to be reviewed so positive and such an author just need to know how good his masterpiece is^^
by the way, i heard that song .. run .. and i really like it!!! .. ok i think this was enough for now .. one last thing .. update soon! XD
bYe bYe
oh i think such a story needs to be reviewed so positive and such an author just need to know how good his masterpiece is^^
by the way, i heard that song .. run .. and i really like it!!! .. ok i think this was enough for now .. one last thing .. update soon! XD
bYe bYe
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is incrediable! Good organization, nice amount of tension. Your character developement is building nicely. Mostly though, I like it because it is different enough to be interesting, yet you have managed to keep them 'in character'. I am looking forward to more.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god this is such a great story yet so sad. This is just a guess but I'm assuming Kagome is pregnant again? Oh please let there be a happy ending to this.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet mother of god. I can't take this anymore. I need release. My heart is literally poundung against my chest wanting to lurch forward and out. Naraku better fucking die. And die horribly. My inner Akuma demands nothing less.
However. I think I will be satisfied with the end. SO you know, either way.
However. I think I will be satisfied with the end. SO you know, either way.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She's pregnant! O no what is Inuyasha going to do now? I say kill Naraku, and let Inuyasha and Kagome stay together and be happy.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so...Kagome's pregnant again, huh? ...that's my guess at least. i can completely understand her...as well as her outlook as to the whole situaiton. i agree with both of them, which makes it hard. yes, they could move around but if someone finds them...they have to much at stake to risk it, especially if they have a kid. poor nieve Kagome though, they'll still keep tabs on her, even if she leaves inu and go after her regardless. man...talk about a freakin catch 22. ....i think there needs to be some flufly intervention (does inu even have sesshoumaru as a brother in this?) go sesshiles!!!! LOL. ::sigh:: i've been thinking lately how they could get themsleves out of that ditch adn the only answer i have is that InuYasha needs to take down Naraku and the whole crew before it can be just him. i see the whole punisher scene acting out with proper cause. (it's not revenge...it's punishment!) ::sigh:: great drama!!! i love it!!!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I have to say I'm torn between loving and hating this cliffhanger. This story is great, you should be proud of such an amazing acomplishment .......but did you have to end the chapter at such an exciting turn point! I hope you don't let Naraku get away with what he's done, Kagome and Inuyasha have suffered enough. I'm truly hoping you'll let them survive this so that they can be happy. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soo .. where to begin...? oooh, i know: this story is awesome!!
i never read one like this, the idea is somehow unique and it reminds me a little bit of a film (not the story but the thing with the dates)
and i love it this way even if it was a little confusing at first but .. WOW!! and the story is just amazing, excellently written and just so fucking delicious!
pleeease you have to update soon!! i beg you .. i just need to read more!! i really hope this ends with a happy end .. but even if i will be sad if it doesn´t, i´ll never stop loving this story!! it´s just great and for you to fulfill my lack of brilliant fanfictions, pls update soon!!
winkzZ^^
i never read one like this, the idea is somehow unique and it reminds me a little bit of a film (not the story but the thing with the dates)
and i love it this way even if it was a little confusing at first but .. WOW!! and the story is just amazing, excellently written and just so fucking delicious!
pleeease you have to update soon!! i beg you .. i just need to read more!! i really hope this ends with a happy end .. but even if i will be sad if it doesn´t, i´ll never stop loving this story!! it´s just great and for you to fulfill my lack of brilliant fanfictions, pls update soon!!
winkzZ^^