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for Gathering the Pieces

by SilverInferno

person Snowfall
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you can get a decent price for a flash drive at Radio Shack. Hope Inu gets over it. Stupid hanyou. And I'm not surprised that Kag understands. Oh, it would be so friggin' awesome if Miroku got Tensaiga to Totosai in time for Sess to bring Rin back! If it's not already too late. *sigh* But, but...he could go to the underworld to get her, ne? I'm such a hopeless sap. *sniffles* Please save little Rin. *gives you best imitation of sad puppydog eyes* Well, it was worth a try anyway.

Snowfall
person CallistaSky
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, please say there is more? This was fantastic! I love how well you write and how you keep true to the characters. It is rare to find a story that does that AND doesn't rush into anything. You take the time to allow the story to develop and flow.

Please please please continue this! I am looking forward to seeing how this will end and in seeing Sesshomaru and Miroku coming together.
person Yhitzak
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I miss you. Though I'm sure you have a life and real things to do, please update. This is like... the ONLY story in this fandom I've gotten hooked on. Please don't forget.
person Ali
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I really like it alot. ive never read a mir/sess story like this before and the oocness seems to make the story work so that makes the story even better. anyway please update soon.
TTFN ^-^
person Mint
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please update soon! I love this so very much ^^
person Rai
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im in love with this story XP
PLEASE, get the next one out soon. i love the story and the plot.
And. lol, who dosent love yaoi? ^__^
Cant wait for the next one!
person Yhitzak
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Booyah! That was totally worth the wait. Thanks! I'm glad Sess is finally regaining himself. And I REALLY can't wait for the battle to ensue (for real). Keep up the fine work; I look forward to your next update!
person TearsofTwilight
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another beautifully done chapter. You've really opened my eyes to the
posibilities of this oh so rare paring. I havn't said this before, but to
me the reason this story is so appealing is that the characters are in
character. I mean sure Sesshoumaru went suicidal, but you can really
imagine him doing that in the series if Rin did die. The way you
portray his guilt and love is just so touching, and the way Miroku cares
for him despite the risks makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.

-TOT
person Rawben
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
person adry
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who is the ruler of the western landes if sesshoumaru is not? the sotry is great! But could repair tensaiga? Tetsusaiga was once broken and it waas fix whit the help of Inuyasha fang???PLEASE!!!!!!!!