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Wow, I really liked this. There's such a dangerous air to the modern era these characters are placed in. I like the present tense usage...haven't seen that a lot. It's fresh and delightful. And the ending of chapter two--what Koga said, just leaves me yearning for more. Naraku is a sexy beast, isn't he? Yesh, that he is, my friend. Lovely fic! Update when you can!

hey, well that was a well written story. I can see the pictures in my head. It was pretty steamy too. male on male isn't my thing, but, it was arousing picturing these guys being so rough with me. OH, did I just write that out loud, my bad.

Kwor!!!!! What was that? Tssss...my finger tips were seriously scorching just scrolling down the page of that hot expedition into my second curious peep of a yoai fic. And Hiten being such a hissy, jealous bitch (such a naughty bishie)! How good was that!!!??? *teehee ~_^*

I stumbled across this fic searching for a steamy lemon featuring Hiten, and being the depraved hentai that I am, decided to give it a go...and excuse me while I wipe the drool from my chin...I really, really liked it! Please, just one thing? Are you a guy or are you a chick? I know that probably seems like a dumb question, but I noticed in your profile that you also like yuri and het fics so you are somewhat of an enigma to me. Not saying that a gay male couldn't read or enjoy such things - it's just not what you would stereotypically expect. If you are a chick - I take a bow. If not - yum anyway.

Cheers

WHOO!!! Is it hot in here or is it just me? My legs just about gave out when Kouga got it on with Hiten in the hallway, and then it gets even more kinky in the bedroom! What's next? I mean it just can't get any better than this. At this rate you're going to kill me. Damn you and you're writing! j/k Keep up with the good writing, I'm looking forward to the next chapter in this story and Seduction of Swords! You're definitely a favorite on my list! ~daiyumi~

UPDATE SOON!

I LURVE YOOOOOOOOOUUUUUU

ahhhhhhhhhh!!!! kouga is sooooo hot!

Ooo naraku’s dialog was perfect, the whole make your whole body blush remark, then saying he would drag inu out of the car to fuck him.

By the love of all things perverted, you had koga paddling hiten’s ass. that was fucking delightfully hot.

I think your ass needs paddling for that damn cliff hanger. had me all worked up, hard on from hell, then you end it with *suck my cock* that was fucking cruel. you damn prick tease. you better update this and soon.

That was really hot. Koga is such a wolf. I'm a little afraid for Inu though. That bastard Naraku is up to no good, I'm sure. Anyhoo! Should be hot. You really are a little shit for leaving off there, but I'll forgive you as long as you update soon. LOL.

well... first of all let me say that i am loving this story. it's got a lot of great things going on in it and i'm loving it! i love the relutance that inuyasha is going through and what's happening with he and naraku. i love the way he avoided going to his house to avoid letting naraku know he was married. niceness. and... am i sensing some angsty fights coming up with hiten and inu-chan over kouga? (drool) i can't wait for the next update! it's going to be good. and... that paddle was awful familiar...