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for Dark Obsession

by YoukaiObsessed

person Jade
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It was totally worth the wait. It's so suspsensful, its's killing me. There's so many directions you can take this, and it will be interesting to see which way you do. I'm ranting, lol. Update soon, it's really good!
person OriginalSinner
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, holy shit! Give me a sec to still my trembling hands.... This fic is sooooo hot.... I never anticipated getting so into it as I have... all I wanted was to find a fic with that sexy lil bishie Hiten and I get my mind absolutely corrupted and twisted in the process. Never actually thought I'd get so off on a bunch of guys getting off on eachother.... Now I've become a fag hag in the truest sense no thanks to your sinful debauchery! Oh and thanking you heaps for updating... I gave up checking and voila! You're such a good, bad girl... But... Please continue!

*trembling subsiding... panting evening out*

K... you get the idea ^_~. Thankyou for the nice dreams I know I will be having tonight!

Peace to you badgirl ^_^
person DragonDarkYoukai
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey your fic is pritty neat, lots of smut and lemons....Pritty good!
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0_0 OMG, that was soooo hot. I'm looking forward to the NarInu action :3 I hope Naraku has a few...toys...that he and Inuyasha can play with. >:) It's all very IC....especially Naraku. I also want him chained to my bed. I'm definetly loving it! *drools* ;3

And just to let you know, I am alive! and I'll update my story within the next week or two. I've had writer's block and lack of time issues -_-; but it's coming! I promise! *big cheesy grin*
person darklord
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl, what a fucking hot blow job. i have an ice cream cone for you. want to lick it? i guarantee cream will come out of it. i wont complain like koga did .i’m having some major tenting problems right now. LOL i know you want to really hurt me, come on sweetheart, sounds fun, doesn't it? LOL i know some mail will be coming from you, as soon as you see this. ROFLMAO!

I thought naraku was going to be the obsessed 1, or is it hiten? you better let naraku have his way with inu. the bite was a nice touch. is he marking him? this story is heating up.

Update this and the other 1 soon (fuck you need to update that 1, it's been a long time) talk to you soon tenshi.
person shadows lurker
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude you rock! Fuck that BJ was hot! ::bear hugs author::I'm actually drooling here.Gahhh you write evil cliffys.
I'm addicted to this hot as hell fic. Thought I lost the story, thanks to others I found it. More, more, more ^^v
person Dante
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! That Koga and Hiten was amazing. Keep up the good work

D_
person kinky lurker
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(fans self) omg... that's so hot... first of all, let me address the ton of hentai that just blew (get it, get it) my... mind... ^_^

now, that blow job, that was so hot. have you been lying to me, do you have a dick you play with? sheesh, it's almost like it's your own dick getting sucked off (i found myself wanting to have a dick so it could be blown like that... )

continuing on because this story is so much more than just the sex (although i'm not going to complain about it!) i love the wave of guilt that attacked inu-chan when he thought about his wife. he is technically cheating on her and he should be having guilty feelings about it, but fuck! i'm encouraging it. i can't wait to see naraku pound into inu-chan, who is sure to love it. i mean, this is a great story and i can't wait to read more from it. it's great! i love it! you know that, ne? i love the guilt you put inu through, it's very realistic and it's very true. i love you for this story, ne?

great job! keep it up!
person Jade
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o I really like where this one is going. I can't wait for the next chapter! *grins evily*
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That had to be one of the most hot and sexy blowjobs I've ever read. Hiten is such a tease. Fuck! Koga is just too sexy. I can't wait to find out what's in store for Inuyasha. I just hope it doesn't get bloody or anything. I do like a master/slave plot though. LOL. Can't wait for the update and this last chapter was worth the wait. Thanks for such a hot ass read.