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hot damn! if i didn't know any better, i'd say there was going to be some hot bishie action in the next chapter, one thunder demon and one inu hanyou going at it like two bitches over a hot peice of meat! (happy hanyou dance) bring it on... i can't wait! (drools) what can i say about this chapter that isn't in that little analogy? i can say that it was very well done... and wow... he just met inuyasha and already so possessive! and hiten... wow. when are he and inu-chan going to fight? and what is kouga going to do when he finds out that hiten erased inuyasha's message? i mean... that's some serious offending, ne? well... i can't wait for the next update... (or sos... whichever comes first... get it?

and i forgive you.

Grrrr, I think Hiten needs another BIG spanking. Nice update, I was just wondering if this story was going to be continued and I'm glad that it is (it's HOT!)

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Very sexy story update soon

Dude I love you! Fuck that was hot! ::kisses author::
I'll get on my knees and beg if you'll update soon. More, more, more ^^v

Oh my god! I am LOVING your fanfiction. I don't see many Kouga/Hiten fanfictions out there! Great job!

okay... first of all,let me say how fucking hot this chapter was! it was very... yummilicious... would be a good word for it. i loved this chapter! okay, okay, so i love the whole story, but hey, you know, ne?

okay, now for the review, review. i love inu-chan's shyness when he realized that he had gotten off on the bj with naraku completely dressed, and naraku is right, blush all over, blush all over! (ahem) well, obviously you know that that lemon was fucking hot as hell! it was kinky enough and inviting enough that i am just going to have to reread it when i'm done here. wow! that's all i can say. it's a very good lemon... i'm going to reread it when i'm through, i believe. :D oh, and the nuzzling from naraku! how awesomely adorable was that? (huggles moment of fluff) okay... now, update again!

i think i want to borrow your muses to help me write my... stories... :D

till next time!
~hanyou-elf

(Squeals with glee) That was great! Don't leave us hanging, update soon! I can't wait to see why exactly Naraku is bad news! EM X3

been meaning to review for a while. feel free to swat me, lazy dork that i am, and i kinda like pain...anyway...i love these pairings! any combination of these four guys overloads the bishie-o-meter. and you do erotic smut well :) do more of it!

Youkai, you.were shocked. at how many hits you recieved! It's an awesome mind-blowing story for crying out loud! You did good girl! Whoo! I never get bored with this story. Every chapter, even though i think all of them are lemons, has something new and exciting. I thought I reviewed for the last chapter, but when I looked... it wasn't there! :(

I don't think I've ever liked Naraku this much though! See what you're hard work does? Just goes to show how good you are. Now doesn't that make you feel wonderful!?! Can't wait till chapter 5!

~daiyumi~

Ahh, I have been reading this and anticipating an update for a while now... Chapter four lived up to the other three magnificently. The little catfight I'm sure Hiten will initiate is going to be.. interesting, at the least. This update also brings into relief that I really need to get working on Raiju no Ai soon. Much love to you.