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Oh, yeah, I've been waiting forever on this one!!! I'm happy you updated! Hope more will come out soon. EM

Wonderful fight there. Hiten deserves every bit of punish Kouga gives him.

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Awesome! InuYasha put the smack down on Hiten. That fight scene was awesome. Kouga walked in at the wrong time. How's Kouga going to react to seeing InuYahsa on top of Hiten? I have to tell you, I love Kouga, I especially love how you've wrote him. He's so hot, dominate in this and he's caring.

Update soon.

YAY! YOU UPDATED! And it was a damn good chapter, too. Fuck, Inuyasha and Hiten were really going at it. Now I really wonder what Kouga is going to do! Update soon!

wows... (drool) i can't wait to see what happens next! you've got an amazingly interesting story and i can't wait for the next part! (drools) and you know how i love the fighting. ohhs... what's kouga's reaction going to be? what's he going to say? what's going to happen to them now? what's next? update! (pleading)

(ahem) i love this story, you know that. and is hiten going to rat on him being married? i can't wait!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

I loved it, but next time I think you should make Naraku the Uke and Inuyasha the Seme.

LOVE THE STORY KEEP IT UP

Ok... M/M/M/M...check. Yaoi... mmm... check. Hmmmm. Damn! Don't you hate it when your review stuffs up!? Now, as I was saying, the story description seems to be in order. Ahhh! I get it! The story is obviously stupid from the lack of guy on girl action? Silly, silly Tainted Dreams *Inuyasha darling, you missed a spot there sweetness...* Of course the story's going to be stupid without throwing Kagome into the sexual foray. *No puppy... there... on Naraku's thigh... that's it... yes sweetie... lick it up* I mean... how can all these hunky males find any pleasure amongst themselves without Kagome showing them the way. Oh dear me, the flame seems to be going a bit cold no? *Don't worry Naraku honey...we mightn't be able to roast anymore marshmallows on that pitiful little flame but look! Here comes Hiten with a can of whipped cream! Here Hiten sweety! Come and show our Kagome Luver what 3 hot men can do with a can of whipped cream... ~_^* Mmmm-mmmm

Oh look a flame. I already know my writing sucks. Now why is this stupid? Was it the concept? Male on male action?--- *Come here Inuyasha and Naraku. Now put these sticks over the flame and roast these marshmallows. Okay now smear the gooey substance all over each other's bodies. Now lick it off of each other* (Sits back and watches the two hot males going at it) Ahh how hot is it! I bet you thought I would delete your review, didn’t you? I do thank you for the hit on the story though. If you wish to discuss this further, please e-mail me.

just rereading the story and checking out the reviews and i nearly died at the hot as hell action that takes place in the story, but then i saw the fun that happens in the reviews (pulls out chocolate syrup) what's a smore without chocolate? (lecherous grin) this hentai is impressed with the story. to write in present and keep it up so long and to write such suspense, that is very impressive. and then to make it as hot as it is... hot damn... i can't wait for the next chapter, you know i love naraku.

ja!