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Holy smokes! I can't wait to find out if Naraku is just a sadist or a blackmailer! Poor Inuyasha

Naraku sweetie, be a dear and accompany Tainted to the 'punishment room'... she's been such a badgirl... yes I 'know' that you know... afterall, you 'are' the one waiting for our phone-sex-virgin to shake his groove thang for you, isn't that right sweetpea?... Oh Tainted... why do you continue to keep us in suspense? *Don't worry Naraku my sweetpea... they won't stay blue forever O_o!!* Nasty Tainted! Stop playing with the muses! We need an update! *hehehe* Wicked hanyou... I know you like the paddle, but unfortunately I think that Tainted would like it too... then we'd never end up getting our update *doh!* Please let me know if your not going to be updating for a while... I shall bring Sesshie around and we can play with the muses together *grins evilly*

Please update... oh this and the nasty hanyou with our poor restrained puppy as well, it's been such a long time since you updated that as well.

Peace sweetpea!

YAY!!!! You updated! I've been on the lookout for an update for SO long! I love how you have the plot going for this, with Inuyasha falling into what seems like a trap of Naraku's--a sexy trap! ^_^ I can't wait for ch. 10! EM

Please more, I just can't wait(^_^)

wow. this is really amazing and very good. i love the way you've been writing naraku. he's so dark, evil and seductive. and the subtle little hints about things that are forthcoming... hanyou really can't wait for the next update. i know you'll do an amazing job writing this (like you've done so far and shall continue to do as well) i love how you're using the slow hints of naraku taking control over inuyasha. he's willing to give into something he's uncomfortable with because he wants to make his lover happy. it's a little out of character, but so very good. i look forward to your next update.

you're doing an amazing job, you're a great WRITER (swats!) and are awesome!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

“Do you like the sound of my voice? Does it turn you on?” *clunk* That would be the sound of my jaw hitting the desk so my tongue can hang out like a panting bitch on heat. OMG!! Inuyasha is being cajoled into having phone sex with my hot, horny, horribly evil hanyou *gurgling on drool* and Naraku being so demanding about Inuyasha giving in! He’s such a bad, bad hanyou isn’t he? And Inuyasha… the phone sex virgin! Good gawds! And Naraku tapes it all! You’ve been a very Bad hanyou Naraku – go to my room and stay there until I tell you you can cum out! Wahooooo! Voyeur central! And Inuyasha is lying there, his huge hanyou cock waiting to be spanked at Naraku’s command! Can we have him lotion himself up? *hentai grin plastering pervertedly across face* Kinda makes you wish you were a fly on the wall don’t it?? DESPAIR (my new word for the week… yup… it’s caught on)!!! You’re a clit tease Tainted *hmph! Crosses arms and stamps feet* Still… a lil’ bit of filth flarn for me to chew on til your next updates… *clapping hands in hentai’d delight!* PHONE SEX!! Gotta love it ^_^

Thankyou badgirl ^_~

The Sinner

i really,really enjoy your work update soon

You know, Tainted Dreams... I'm obsessed with your story. Believe it or not, I had dreamt with it yesterday night. In my dream, Inuyasha was driving his car while talking to Kouga on the phone, nothing more. Only a flash, but it was very intense. It was exactly the same image that I figured in my mind when I read your story by first time last Monday. My dream repeated it with a sense of motion. Very good. It was due to your skillful writing, I think.
I want to make clear for you that it the first time I am so hooked with a fiction. I've read a lot of them but they become flat and insipid at some point, and I quit reading without finishing them. But your story is tasty, appealing from the first chapter. I was surprised when I realise I could not stop reading. I swallowed it in one afternoon. Very impressive. I can't stop thinking about it. I've read it three times by now. I've analized your writing building (it is almost a teacher habit), the way you bring the conflict, the rythm, when you accelerate the narrative or when you make a pause, the way you create second meanings, your paragraph construction, dialog fluidity, subtleness... God! You are good. You are a writer even when you say you aren't. That's why your story is different: you have literature.
Keep working!! Go on!! Muses hold you.

This is really cool!

Lol, Kouga could always blackmail Inuyasha into a relationship, but that probably wouldn't go over too well with the hanyou. ^_^

Congratulations for your story, because it is very well written. It has a strong inner structure, very well exposed, very intriguing and nervy, it has substance, suspense and sometimes a strange atmosphere (it is a very personal feeling, I know) that make me feel a bit nervous. Voluptuosity, darkness and danger very well mixed up. I admire the treatment you give to the characters, they are full of life, they are credible and complex, and I suppose it is so because of the nature of the decissions they make. I love specially the way you treat Naraku (masterly painted), and Inuyasha's ravishment for him.
Please, go on!!!
I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! Update soon!!!
CONGRATULATIONS again!!