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c'mon i want to read more! naraku and inuyasha woo dark fic your so good

Nice I cant wait to read more. ^-^ This story is pretty darn good so far. I like the dirty talk, and your description of Naraku. ^-^ Sweet start.

you are goanna to writ a beta!!! c'mon! writ the 2nd cha[ter! update soon! :)

Excellent idea for a story. Wow, I never would have thought of anything like this. Keep up with the good work.
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Youkai, very yancha, little sneaky one. fuck the sex between hiten and koga was fucking hot. hiten took it up the ass very well. such dirty dialog from you, i am shocked, very pleased, but shocked. come join the yaoi rpg, it rocks.
I know how inuyasha feels now.i have the same tenting/ problem he does.
How long will you hide behind that sweet beta of yours? get your ass moving on the seph/sess story, and do tell me next time when you put a new story out.

update soon

Interesting first chapter. Keep up the good work. Plz update as soon as you can

Whew! Yah! That's what I'm talkin' about! Fast, hard and hotter n' hell! Hiten makes a great b!tch!!!! I'm hooked! How are you gonna top that with Inu/Naraku??? Hmmm???? UPDATE SOON!

(and the crowd goes wild waiting for more!) this is a great start to a dark story and i can't wait to see what happens with naraku and inu-chan. i really liked how you portrayed inu's unwillingness to be unfaithful to his wife, but his need to do it too. i liked the hesitation that he felt, the realistic pain he was suffering because of his decision to be with other men while kagome's away. now, how will that affect his future, how does that lead to the darkness (hentai thoughts fill mind as thoughts of wild yaoi and hardcore yaoi fills head... *drool*)