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for A Pup and a Cub

by FrustratedPhoenix

person andross
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL LOL LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ohhhhh man htatchapta 7 was funny ding a ling lol i wasnt expecting him to sing that LOL little cur kouga is.
person Diane
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot seems good so far, I've only read the first maybe half of the 1st chapter. You did jab a pet peeve of mine though [unfortunately it gets poked a LOT], the US dub has really done a number on poor Kaede, in the original Japanese she speaks formally not in really bad Elizabethan English. So personally that's the only problem I have with it so far, please check out a few subtitled episodes with Kaede in it, or watch the 1st movie subbed she's in that at least twice.
person Gyousei
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious so far, I can't wait to see more!!!!
person LadyRayne
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has got to be the funniest story ever. Koga that coniving little cub, didn't know he had it in him with that thick head of his. He must have been smarter as a child than an adult or teenager. Update soon!
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow Im ur fan now! i love ur stories