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for A Pup and a Cub

by FrustratedPhoenix

person Darkinferno
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for the monk, he can't seem to catch a break.
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SO ORIGINAL IN my view and it's good , please finish it, was funny also
person silver dragon
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a cute fic, keep it going!
person inuficcrzy
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the funniest thing i have ever read! and so cute! i can't wait to see more!
person inu-geri
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY!!! this story is great..I can't wait for the next chapter. I laughted so hard I was crying.
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really funny. Comedy is easy to tell, but it is hard to write. I can't wait till you finish...Will poor Miroku ever get any peace? Damn he got a raw deal!
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
priceless...absolutly freakin priceless. i don't think i've laughed so hard in a damn long time, when Kouga broke into his song. LMFAO. that was to good. props!!! never really read a story such as this before, so definite koodos there. your characters seem to be right on key...and man do i see InuYasha getting teased to hell and back when he 'gets big' again. that's just to fucking comical. why can i see him running into sesshoumaru at some point and teh man nearly flipping out. feasilble thought that Inuyasha made the mistake to mate and there is a littel one of him running around, at least a fesible thought for fluffykins...until he realizes that inu smells like himself. i just can see that interaction. how can i say...i don't think sessh would have miroku's decorumn not to punt-kick him across the villiage. very well done. this is GREAT. i really can't wait to see what you do with it. why can i see these two monsters terrorizing naraku? make him pack his bags and go west. LOL. keep it up!!!!!
person srg1
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please update soon!
person chanda
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this story is too funny... I love it and cant wait til you update...
person AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this was sooo cute and evil at the same time poor inuyasha turned into a little kid must have looked so helpless and sweet and as for kouga kinda glad he got changed lol UPDATE SOON!!