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for Realization

by FrustratedPhoenix

person drake220
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, LOVED THIS. seriously, the romantic inside me is screaming that i need a boyfriend right now. absolutely one of the sweetest things i've ever read. especially considering the limited words used, this lovely little ficlet is all the more impressive. lovely job!
person Rawben
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really cute and well written. but by one shot you dont mean one chapter do you? ... update soon!
person deep serenity
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad, writing was good, but to short even for a one shot, I almost(or maybe I did) miss the point was the realization that his hand had a mind of it's own? or that he touched her so he could enjoy the few remaining time in his life?
person MORE
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! GOOD! ME WANT MORE!