rate_review Reviews

very strange.. but I enjoyed it emensely... er.. i know, spelling. Anyway, i really, really liked it! It was.. odd, but endearing. very bittersweet, yet hopeful. Urgh... no way to explain. Just.. it was good!

wow that was ... really good... i loved how you made it so that it didn't seem like no one was there but them... i don't know if they loved eachother or not but i think its ok because... the story was good... he took care of her and loved her and she did the same... all though i don't know if they loved eachother... i think its sweet... they were made for eachother in this story... i hope you make another one shot... about Sesshoumaru and Kagome! ~ diana

OMFG. That was...so beautiful. My chest hurt while I was reading it. You know that achy-burning hurt you get when you read something that just couldn't be any better or more true, and that makes you wanna laugh and cry and burn things and throw a party, maybe not in the order or maybe so but...

And now I've devolved into helpless, hopeless Joycean rambling. *composes self*

It was just gorgeous. *nub*

I apologize for not reviewing the first time I read this. I couldn't remember the name of the story or the author. Last night I had the desire to find it again, but had no idea where to look. And here it is! As with your other stories, it is very well written. Just like Fugue, the ending seems somewhat bittersweet. Some of the ways you express small truths are very interesting, such as the whole concept of being afraid of doors. I found the idea that Sesshoumaru raised children to be interesting and don't quite understand why he would do it.

I would like to see you write a fic with this coupling in the fuedal era where Inuyasha and the other characters are not dead and there is no great sadness to Kagome's life and no great boredom for Sesshoumaru's existance. It would be a challenge to write it with a new take on it. Perhaps I dare you to do it just to see if you can. I have recently realized that my stories seem to have violence and death bringing people together and I intend to attempt something different once I finish the fics in progress. I am challenging myself. Think about it.

Snowfall

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

I came across this story, read it and had so many emotions at the same time it was like a whirlwind of confusion, anger, hopeful, hopeless, amazement, thoughts went swirling in my head as I read it. I highly recommend it. Very nice job!

I loved this...

Utterly fantastic, and deep...wicked and true..

one of the best one-shots I have had the pleasure of reading, thank you.

Sel~

I like the ground-in pessimism. You don't see that much in a story. Very good.

I love this story. It's so good. I love the way they are so sad and how you ended up having them together like that. Sorry if my comments not great but this is the first time I have reviewed for a story. Keep up the good work.

This is beautifully done. One of the best One sots of Sesshoumaru and Kagome! It was slightly confusing as first but when I read it over it made sense. I love the way you wrote it. I thought that nothing could be perfect, maybe close, but never prfect. I was wrong. Gosh this fic IS perfect.