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This was wonderful. Thank you.

Holly fucking shit. Wow! I'm not even fucking kidding. Wow! That was like wow. I'm totally at a lose for words. All I could say for five full minutes was holly fucking shit and wow. You are the best writer in all the world! No joking. The fucking best. And I thought I was good. Shit, you make me look like, i don't know, dirt! You're just that fucking good! I wish I could write like you. Man... I just can't stop writing you telling you how good it is. Do more. Do a lot more like this. And I mean A LOT! I loved it. More then anything. More then my purple eyed book. And nothing beats that. You did it. You beat it. How fucking amazing. WOW!
~TH~

P.S. FUCKING WOW!

*worship**worship**worship**worship**worship**worship**worship**worship**worship**worship**worship* *^.^*

Wow. Just wow. That was so gorgeous I actually had to recollect myself before writing this. Beautiful!

-Soma

Wow, that reminded me a lot of the movement referred to as theatre of the absurd (Waiting for Godot, Endgame, etc)...kind of reminiscent of Samuel Beckett's "Endgame" as far as the atmosphere and everything goes. It's a lot different from the other works of yours I've read so far, but still very good. Keep up the good work ^.^

your story tuged at my soul

it made me see the world in a different way and it made me see how lucky i am to have what i have and that some don't even have that.

i saw that some or most are looking for to love someone and for someone to love them and that they are afraid of something going right for a change and that they are undeserving of what good seems to be happening in there lives.

the way your wrote the story and how you portayed it and how you described what sesshomaru and kagome were feeling and what they were afraid of and what there lives have been like and how they are both afraid of something good hapening to them and if it does happen that they are undeserving and unworthy of what ever it might be no matter how small it is.

so please update soon or write more stories your good and this story is a work of art truly it it.

ja ne

Wow...that was deep and confusing. Great Job! I loved it!

This story was amazingly written: it has all the irony and the quirks of humankind. I loved it!

wow. i feel dizzy. this is art! it's so beautiful and sad at the same time and it leaves the reader with a very melancholy feeling.

Brilliant. I loved it.