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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please contact me!!! I need to tell you something VERY IMPORTANT!!! (about your next INU YASHA chapters)
PLEASE EMAIL ME!!!
PLEASE EMAIL ME!!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AND DON"T DELETE THIS STORY!!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok. inu yasha stays in kagome's house for a while, that's when the phone rings. it's the 'who are you' guy. inu yasha is scared for kagome. more love scenes.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you are underage, you do know that AFF can trace your IP address and notify your parents right? They're cracking down on underage users and it looks to me like you are one of them. I'd delete the stories and run if I were you.
Plus, you can't write worth shit and your grammar and spelling skills suck donkey dick.
Plus, you can't write worth shit and your grammar and spelling skills suck donkey dick.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your only experience with sex has been reading fanfiction and going through sex ed, right?
Your "lemon" needs a lot of work. At least the story is easier to read now, though I would suggest correcting the first chapters the next time you update.
Maybe--I have a brilliant idea!--you should stick to writing at fanfiction.net until your spelling and grammar improves so that you can impress the people here. That's the point of posting online.
Your "lemon" needs a lot of work. At least the story is easier to read now, though I would suggest correcting the first chapters the next time you update.
Maybe--I have a brilliant idea!--you should stick to writing at fanfiction.net until your spelling and grammar improves so that you can impress the people here. That's the point of posting online.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i love ur story
though im sorry u broke ur arm.
ohhh and i really love ur story dont stop just because other ppl say it sux dont stop
but what u should stop is LISTENING TO THOSE STUPID FUCKERS IF THEY DONT LIKE IT THEY SHOULD KEEP IT TO THEMSELVES
thanks bye bye now
though im sorry u broke ur arm.
ohhh and i really love ur story dont stop just because other ppl say it sux dont stop
but what u should stop is LISTENING TO THOSE STUPID FUCKERS IF THEY DONT LIKE IT THEY SHOULD KEEP IT TO THEMSELVES
thanks bye bye now
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tHAT was cool.
nice chapters.
update soon
nice chapters.
update soon
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, ya should warn me when ya update though. Lemon was ok. Might want to work on the details a bit more other than that not bad. Update soon plz.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like your fanfic ,especially chapter 9 ....what i dont understand is that Kagome isn't a virgin, who was the first to have sex with her ? i hope u update soon...
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Akward but good. Can't wait for you to update!!