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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 8 was good, I so dont' know who Kagome will end up with which is good! great story, and thanks for putting me on the update list
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was such a good chapterin one of the earlier chapters you had me guessing as to who her dream was about but then sessys thought
confirmed who it was i think this is the first fanfic that has kept me guessing in a long while youre an awsome writer keep up the good work
and please update as soon as you are able to do so once again great chapter and story so far cant wait for the next chapter^,-,^
confirmed who it was i think this is the first fanfic that has kept me guessing in a long while youre an awsome writer keep up the good work
and please update as soon as you are able to do so once again great chapter and story so far cant wait for the next chapter^,-,^
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this fic..... lots of action keep up the good work
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I LOVE this story line!! I hope you continue it and I am looking forward to reading more!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One:
Everything seemed to flow so well, and that one wish could grant so many desires was satisfying. The beating heart throught the chapter was a nice binder. I look forward to chapter two.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Everything seemed to flow so well, and that one wish could grant so many desires was satisfying. The beating heart throught the chapter was a nice binder. I look forward to chapter two.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for putting in the effort to get this chapter up. It is always greatly appreciated, and even more so with a good story.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I love how it is so descriptive, and how you kept them all in character. I wonder who of the dog demon lords that Kagome is suposed to be with... I can't wait to find out... PLEASE update soon!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story!! It's a damn shame that out of 600 hits, you've only received 8 reviews. What a crock... People suck sometimes. Anyway! Wonderful plot line and great attention to detail! I can't wait to see what happens! UPDATE SOON!!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job! you did a very good job or telling how the changes in Kagome came about and you made her grow up, hate when authors age her but her personality stays the same, because people do change as they grow older
not sure I like the fact that though INuyasha got what he wanted he's become a little bitter, love that everyone is working together!!!!!!!! Love the mature feel of the story
and Kisho and Kagome? Right or Sess well I think I would love the Kisho thing and IF Sess I think this would be one of few good K/S stories so very good job! and I like this new villan. The plot is original Kikyo a demon! lol
Very good story, your writing is great if you have an update email you send out please add me to it.
not sure I like the fact that though INuyasha got what he wanted he's become a little bitter, love that everyone is working together!!!!!!!! Love the mature feel of the story
and Kisho and Kagome? Right or Sess well I think I would love the Kisho thing and IF Sess I think this would be one of few good K/S stories so very good job! and I like this new villan. The plot is original Kikyo a demon! lol
Very good story, your writing is great if you have an update email you send out please add me to it.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon!
**Ash**
**Ash**