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for Sunset Love

by AuroraNyte

person DEEP SERENITY
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAP, we finally see Sess feelings and I loved the whole Dragon part!

Take your time with your stories(I'm extra slow with mine, being grown and life takes up time)

person Bianca
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was great. I was not disapointed ( I never am). Well I have a question though. Is Inuyasha fallingg for Kagome again since he asked her to meet him at the garden or some place? If he is then oh my gosh there's still hope^.^ Well either way if it ends up being a Sesshy/Kag fic which it probably will be then thats fine with me. I'm not really a fan of those pairing, but you're good at the feeling stuff. Well I hope you update soon please because I want to know what Inuyasha has to talk about with Kagome^_^ Well buh bye!!
person Snowfall
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I love the power that Kagome displays and the fact that she is befriending everyone. Ah ha, she beat the bear. Such a mystery, the young demon who looks like her, possibly one of her ancestors, making her a hanyou? And then there is Iyashii. I don't understand his role either. This sure is complicated. Maybe I've missed something. Ah well, I'll have to read it again. I know there must be hints that I'm to dense to have realized. Awww, Sesshoumaru was being a real sweetheart while she was asleep.

Thanks for another great chapter.

Snowfall
person demonqueen
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story so far! You now have two possible demon's who look like the one in Kagome's dreams. Course this doesn't mean that the one demon won't try and get Kagome interested in him, thus making Sesshomaru start to become jealous. I'm still trying to figure out who the mysterious woman was that Kagome met that one night on their way home from their rescue mission. Also, I think the other demon(can't think of his name)that has black hair and blue eyes is somehow related to Kagome?! Glad to see that Inuyasha and Kikyo have started a family. They seem to be very happy together and so do the monk and slayer. Are you going to have Shippo and Rin start to get interested in one another? Anyway, good story. I'm sure myself and many others will be trying to figure things out, like who the bad guy is,etc.
person Bianca
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait until you update again!!!^_^
person Deep Serenity
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
part to was great!, really enjoying this story, action and suspense keep up good work
person Ayeka Penor
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so good I want to cry...ok maybe not, but close. Your writing is true quality, but I detect a bit of confusion over the difference between the wwords 'conquer' and 'concur.' The plot is amazing! Usually there's enough hints and foreshadowing for me to guess exactly who will do what, but even the prophecies are obscure! Luv ya!
person dark angel-justice
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your fic is really good,continue soon with this.
person Reader
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I can't wait to see what she has in mind for the bear demon!
person deep serenity
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, the rescue chapter was great!!! Shippo!!!!! grown, I love him that way, anyway very good job!