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for Sunset Love

by AuroraNyte

schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow lotta stuff goin on this is a good fic i hope that u update it soon
person deep serenity
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, part two was even better! very sweet, and I cant wait to see where this goes, great job
person Snowfall
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That was so sweet. I was hoping that Ozeki would give Sess a piece of his mind, and under orders to protect Kag's. Cool that him and Tatsu had been able to discern that kag's loves Sess and then told him. But, I wonder what difference it will make. Rin coming straight out with calling Kagome her mother was great. I hope Sess gets Sora for this. Maybe Iyashi can deal the death blow. He deserves that privilege. Babbling now. I just read some that I had missed last night and then low and behold, there is a new chappie today! Yeeeehawwww.

I am anxiously awaiting your next chappie. Wonderful story and well written.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, very complex and I like it! nice that you actually SHOW why everyone loves kagome, i dislike stories that have her perfect and everyone's angel without explaining Why and how she came endeared to their hearts!

and Sess giving a rose ! I'd say he's under two spells, one from Sora and one from Kagome! LOL cant wait for more
person Lensa
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Giggle,
I have happiness that you updated. Thats all, just thought you'd like to know that I enjoy your story very much.
person Snowfall
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, somehow I missed some chapters. This is an absolutely wonderful chapter. Kag's referred to Rin as 'our daughter'! Wow! And Sess poisoned her. OMG! What a wonderful story. It is promptly going into my favorites as I don't want to miss another update. Very well written. I am sorry not to have reviewed more. You deserve it.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person emily
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for the new chaptr but I wanted to see her beat up shessie up a little. I look forward to the nextchapter
person Diane
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this & look forward to more. On the use of Youkai to mean both the creatures & their powers I think that's a bit off, youki is the power youkai give off as far as I can tell, but since it's your fic you can use whatever you like.
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter! liked the action and the mystery....but still waiting on K/S one on one interaction

but the plot is coming along nicely!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?