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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

I loved the new chapter and look forward to the next!

There was quite a bit of info in this chapter. I would have preferred to see some of the history in flashback action plays more than a story told (Iyashi) (I'm such an action whore!) I feel so sorry for Iyashi even though his predicament is a result of an earlier choice. I've been wondering if that sweet little Inu girl that warned Kisho is his daughter. I still say that Iyashi should get the death blow on that bitch Sora.

I'm glad that Kagome has influenced so many in Sesshoumaru's territory and that he is in love with her. Even if it became acceptable for them to mate, how would they overcome the time problem? What a dilema.

Soooooo, the wench is healing faster than she should, eh? I hope that whatever is happening to her helps her to defeat Sora. And Kagome called her a whore! Wow! *shivers-hate that bitch Sora* So, does everyone know that Sora is an enemy now?

Yay! Kag's saved Sess. Ooooh and did he really kiss her?! *tingles in the pit of my stomach*

The blue aura is very interesting. Mmmm.

The picture of Kag's shoving a chocolate bar in Sess's mouth is just so friggin' funny! That was too cute.

A great chapter even though I had hoped that the plot had advance further in this chapter. *stomps foot* I'm just so impatient in my desire to whoop some Sora ass. LOL

Snowfall

Oh! And I have to say that your description of Sess while he was under Sora's spell was absolutely wonderful in its detail. Imagining Sess confused like a child brings warmth to the heart. Glad you had him react that way. Rounds his character out really well and makes him seem more, should I say it, human. LOL

Snowfall

I don't know if I've posted a review to your story yet, but I'd be surprised if I haven't. This is fantastic! Your writing is superb. It has all the right amounts of everything I look for in a story: mystery, romance, angst. And when I talk angst, I mean it has "good" angst, not the usual abnoxious amount that most stories around here seem to follow. You are setting up the relationship between Kags and Sess quite well without all the constant "taking things the wrong way," "obnoxious stubbornness," "unnatural unrealisticness," or "constant wrong impressions." And I love the OOCness you've written into the characters, especially Sess. If it makes sense, it doesn't seem like it is so far fetched OOC because it seems it is simply another logical direction the OC could take provided the right circumstances. And you've made the characters, including the original ones, intelligent. I appreciate that. You've given your readers character devolopment; multiple, intwining plots; and you are keeping all of those plots alive. It shows that you were thinking about where the story would end and how you were going to get there from the beginning of this epic. And that you are consciously tying it all together throughout. To often "writers" forget where the characters have been and loose track of where they were taking them. I put writers in quotes there because I wouldn't qualify those people as writers. Please keep me with something good to read, update soon.

nice chap can't wait for next one

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

I can easily say that this is the one story that I eagerly await for updates. I AM HOOKED!! I don't know if I should be happy about that fact or not. Truly wonderfull! I am injoying the fact that you didnt automatically throw Sess and Kagome together. There are not enough stories out there that take the time for emotions and romance to grow. True storytelling. Looking forward (grumbles) to your next update!

I love the new chapters and thanks for updating so quickly

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?