rate_review Reviews

i would like to thank the brilliant writer who gave birth to such a great story. that was probably my favorite inu fic so far...and i've read quite a few. (I can't seem to get enough of the Inu x Kag stories - they're my fav. couple) i really appreciate the diction and style of this story too, since you just don't get to see good writing nowadays. so, once again, thank you very much for entertaining me with such a wonderful story. keep writing!

Now, I have never posted a review before; i've never had the reason to. In fact, before I read this work I hadn't even registered on the site. This story, however, absolutely called for a review. The call was so strong that I could actually hear it yell "You FOOL! Review this fanfic immediately or face the perils of a thousand hells!". That being said, this is one of the best literary pieces I have ever read on this site. It was all about a character driven story instead of a, excuse the term, fuck-fest, and that is what made this story truly great The actions of Inuyasha and Kagome were entirely believable and your excellent vocabulary really enhanced the entire experience; I could actually picture them in that close-knit circumstance with Inuyasha boiling over with inner pain and Kagome seeking to comfort him. I'm glad you sought to bring forward Inuyasha's tough and traumatic past instead of just finding an arbitrary reason for them to have sex. I sincerely hope you create a sequel to this brilliant story and go more in depth with Kagome's insecurities and how Inuyasha deals with them.

Hmmm... I like your story conceptually, though I thought it a tad unrealistic, and wished, constantly, that you would stay on subject. Oh, and p.s., should Inuyasha and Kagome ever have sexual relations, I assure you Inuyasha would be the seme! Overall good job, though.

Only read the first chapter so far but it was beautiful. I loved that they did manage to not be entirely serious and that Inuyasha is all newbie, but an eager student. And I agree about the black pubic hair.

My very favorite bit:

'Finally having her lungs once more, she made to speak. She meant to tell him that she enjoyed herself. That he was her one and only, and that she loved him more than he could ever know. She wanted to further soothe his uncertainties after years of constant rejection from the world he lived in. To drive home a few more points as to why he mattered and that she didn’t care what anyone else had to say on the issue of his worth. All of this she poured into a speech, a look, a caress of her hand as she at last located her voice and forced it to the surface.

“Kiss good.”'

Hello, I originally read this story when it was first published, but never got around to reviewing, or at least I think I didn't. I was rereading it again during this lull of new stories, and I noticed your note about a sequel. Is that offer still valid? This is one of my favourite one-shot InuYasha/Kagome stories, and I would recommend it to my friends if they actually liked reading fanfictions rather than creating their owncharacters and original stories. I tried I hope that counts for something. On this time around in reading your story I was struck by one of InuYasha's thoughts. What Would happen once the night was over? Would Kagome be a little bit more intimate or would everthing go back to the way that it was originally? As always I am struck by the way that Rumiko Takahashi adressing the world's racism in the concept of Youkai, Hanyou, and Human relations. The prejudice could not be more pronounced in your story if you tried. I believe that the characters as you portrayed them were extremely close to the original characters' character. Too many fictions have InuYasha being extremely knowledgable in the ways of sex. I don't see how that is possible. I was surprised by how unrestricted the TV in Japan is. It jus goes to show I should get out of the country for a while. I hope you continue to write more about the InuYasha series. Thankyou for writing this and good luck on whatever you are writing at the moment. ZincPaw.

Ok, i want to give you a lot of praise for this because this is the only story i have ever reviewed on AFF.net. Not that i'm one of those mean readers, i just usually never felt so strongly about anything to leave a message... But i think this was really well written and i agree with every move you made in the story. I felt really strongly about this fic because i dont' think it was gratuitous at all. I think it had a very real point. I don't know how to describe it but i loved this story so much. I really felt for Inuyasha, his confusion and rejection, in a lot of the scenes. And i loved the fact that i was never bored with the story. I hung on almost every word because i really wanted to know how the characters were feeling. This story gets two double thumbs up because i thought it was really great. I think it was because it was "something real". I think it could actually happen. People might complain that it was a little OOC (and i admit Kagome's forwardness did disturb me a little) but you know, if you really considered the situation, it's not SO hard to imagine her doing that. Inuyasha IS her "best friend" and she is in love with him. It all works out in the end. All right, well i'm done babbling. Great, great story! ^__^

I LOVED YOUR STORY! I only wosh t would have been longer. I love the way you wrote on the characters emotions, it makes the story feel all that more reall.
Keep on writting, it's one of the most beautiful goft a person can give to others. Thank you for that gift.

I have to say it- Wow! This story was so beautiful, and not what you'd expect to be on here. But I wish there was more of this on here! This was amazing- only wish you'd of ended the thing properly! *winks* Simply lovely.

I must say that this is the best lemon i´v ever read,really O_O
Amazing!!! :D

This is, without a doubt, the best Inuyasha fanfic I've read so far. This story was so touching, and real, and so incredibly in character...it's just perfect. Thank you for such an engaging read.