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That was beyond amazing. You are an extremely talented writer, and I admire this fiction. It was well written and had excellent detail. Good job, I can't wait to read more writings from you! I don't care how long it takes for you to update, because if it was as good as this piece, it's worth the wait.

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I absolutely love your story. I like you emotional details, it really helps the reader get inside the character's head. Are you continuing this story or is it just a one-shot? If you're continuing it please update soon!

8 days huh? you know lots of people post other peoples work on ff.net specialy in this fandom. Well aside from that, you story was very very um yeah it was very good (never now how to express myself with this type of story) Um I think you got my vote, but the nominations are not done just yet. There's still more to read.

I loved your story. I think you did a marvalous job of keeping Inuyasha and Kagome in character, while allowing them to grow. It really bothers me when readers complain about characters being OOC when all the author has done is give them room to grow. The only thing that needs to stay the same about the character are their reasons for doing something. We can all do things that are out of character if the motive is strong enough. I hope you write a sequal some day.

Man! That was HOT! I want a sequel, now please please..... oh wait after a take a cold shower. ^__^

Oh, man, where do I start? This is a beautiful, moving, well thought-out, erotic, and at times very funny story. As I was reading it, it became more and more obvious that you had put tons of time and effort into it, and the added editorial really drove that point home. This is a must-read for any Inu/Kag fan; it's just fantastic. Oh, and the perfectly apropos reference to Sisyphus--brilliant.

So I sat down and went through the stories that were updated and I came across yours. I thought to myself...."All right she updated a new chapter and is going to continue! WHOO_HOOO!!!" But, alas, no you did not. :( So I just re-read your story and I have to admit I enjoyed it so much, eh again...! I then realized that I had never left you a proper reveiw for it. Shame shame shame on me. :( But, it is ok, becuase I have finally made myself write one! But I dont want you to think that I am doing this as an obligation or anything, because I am not. I have not seen any fanfictions that have captured these two characters in that situation so well. I love this story and it is definatly one of my favorites and it deserves to be recognized as such! And I will definatly still be on the lookout for plagerists who think that they can steal your work, as well as others. Shame shame on them. Don't you worry, I got your back! And I definatly am looking forward to reading more stories from you!

Kiwi

This was nothing short of spectacular. The sex was not only wonderful, but it was so realistic, especially the kissing. Probably the most realistic love scene I've ever read, including not in fanfiction. Great work. I hope you write original stuff, because I'm sure you could be a published writer. Thanks.

Wow.
I think that word says it all. This story was sheer genius.. Simply amazing.. Wonderfully and beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it a lot. The way Kagome and Inuyasha acted.. I could see this as an episode happening! Well, maybe not all of it, but you get it right? XD Anyways.. I think that this has been the best lemon fic of Inuyasha I have ever read. It was AMAZING. I am so jealous of your talent. SKjsdlfkjdsf. I would LOVE a sequel. LOVE.
Omgmgslkfj. Okay. Thank you for this story. Lately, all the InuxKag fics I have read are not even worth my time, but this one.. You have proved that there are at least some good fics out there, and I just haven't uncovered them yet. So thank you soooooooooo much again. I think it's the rarity of these good fics that makes them so special to read when I find them.

Always, Naima

Loved it to pieces! It was sooo good. The ending was hilarious!