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YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!! no. seriously. i know that the other 90-something people above me have said the same thing but this is by far one of my favorite fics on this site. a lot of these fics are just a romp in the hay...not that that's a bad thing... but all-too-often they can be badly written. you, my friend, are de-freakin-lightful. seriously. i dont think i can say how much i love your story. i wont pressure you for a sequal PER SE, but i will ONLY be appeased if you write more yummi-yummi interludes. keep up the good work!!!!!! ^________^

....oh- i forgot -- i laughed out loud and fell out of my chair at the line, "And when it comes down to it, who wouldn’t want to fuck Inuyasha?" god knows i sure wouldn't pass up a chance .... ^_~

Since 'Bill the Surly' has not elaborated on his reasoning behind his review, I have removed it. I will be happy to repost it should he contact me via e-mail with further details. Really people, I don't mind if you tell me you hated the fic - just tell me WHY and what led you to your conclusions.

Well, I figured I should actually review this and read it ALL the way through in one sitting (which wasn't easy cause I got inspiration for my own story which I'll show you tomorrow). So, as always, I find your story well done and it brings up a couple of points that do need to be hashed out before Kagome is ready to do what she wants to do. I expect you'll cover that in the sequel, well hell, I know you will. But anyway.

As for the moron listed above? Pity sex is only good for some people, and I wouldn't call it pity per say, not sure how I'd classify this type of sex, but its not FULL pity, I believe...we'll hash this out later, ne?

Laterness. (as always, all spelling errors are to be ignored)

I have spent a lot of time thinking about your writing. A lot of time, in fact about a days worth of meditation was required for this. PLease, please, please, please give me some pointers, tips, clues, anything to help me write like that. It was amazing to say the least, in fact that's the least I could say. You did a perfect job of showing Kagome's feelings, fears, and need to please others. I'm tempted to believe that you do in fact own Inuyasha. I would gladly follow you to hell and back for a continuation of this, and no, I don't just mean the lemon, I'm more interested in the effects the experience has on Inuyasha emotionally, and mentally. It is obvious from your skill that you have been writing for a very long time, and are a very commited fan of Inuyasha. This alone would of got you 20 stars if I had them to give (sadly I don't...) but then you took it all a step further with Inuyasha, his past experiences and all of it. You showed how people treated him, and how no matter what he did, he would always be a half-breed to the people. Because of that you were able to paint perfectly the mind of the worlds favorite hanyou.

Now for your technical work. You went the extra mile when most of us, myself is included (you have no idea how much this applies to me. This is why people think engineers are so inhuman), just give a straight story that is said and done. To say you are gifted wiith the written language is an insult. You got the facts about the character, many of which most people probably don't know unless they read the manga and watch the series religiously (like myself, and obviously you). Then you get facts about people in general. You are 100% accurate on peoples emotions as virgins. (Yes I admit I am one of them, so I can say that part is most accurate.). Then you get down to human anatomy and your there again with facts, which are perfect which I'll testify to and win, since I am a male, and to say there is a ton of tension is like saying the ocean is a small pond. I don't know if I can say much more other than you have really inspired me to write, which is saying a lot since I'm studying a science that is thought to turn out souless people. Thank you again for this piece of writing.

And now for the flame you did to the idiots out there! It brought tears to my eyes. It was beautiful, just beautiful. I can't but it into words. Once again thank you for your work.

Beautiful piece. Even without the citrus. Kagome isn't often confronted with Inuyasha's rejection from society. The image of a sexually knowledgable Kagome is a little.. disturbing, but not unbelievable. Especially if she's been with Inu a while and has had some motivation :) I'm sure she would have acted much differently if SHE had been the one to catch him (maybe with some oswaris and henti comments), but with the vilagers and his rejection, I can see her wanting to do anything in her power to comfort him and make him feel accepted. 'Course if I wasn't in the limy mood I would say the kissing and the conversation woulda been enough for that.. but erm yeah. no complaints. *drools over exceptional lime* no complaints at all.
Glad they didn't have sex though. Kagome was right in thinking that *that* at least needs conversation and full knowlede of the others feelings. I'm also glad that you mentioned Kik, but did not make her in any way the focus of this piece. The piece was not about Kagome's feelings for Inu, but her desire to let him know that he was loved and accepted- at least by her.

Please continue this fic. Not only was it incredibly erotic but it was a terrific character study of both of them. I have read it several time and I am in awe of you. Thanks for the wonderful work. Toni

WOW, I can't beleive that people would actualy plagiarize you 8 days after posting! Thats just horrible, and readers should know not to do that, it's not only illegal but it's moraly wrong, and people who do it should be kicked off of the fan fiction sites. I was so happy when I found your story and it turned out to be great, it's so terribly hard to find good storys on this site that is so geared for 'adult' topics that most authors forget the importance of plot and originality. Reading 'Something Real' was a refreshing break from the outrageous sex scenes and endless similaritys. I can't wait until your next post and I hope that the dissapointing readers don't discourage you.

-Kori ^,~*

that was a great story! you have got to write the next part. please and thank you:) I would like it very much, and I think a lot of other people would too;) I mean its a great story you cant just stop now! I really want to see what more Miroku has to say about what Inuyasha said to Kagome in a sopost to be quite enough that the others couldn't hear tone, "it isnt like either of us got any real sleep last night!":) Plllllllleeeeeeeeease<:3 Im just dieing here I've read this storie about a million times now hoping you would have the next chapter to it writen and ready for me and everybody else to read! Hope you are having a good summer:)

I read you story and thought that it was very interesting. What Inuyasha is experiencing is a lot like what the mutants(X-men) in the Marvel Comics world have experienced. Yes, its fear,and prejedic(spelling?),and dislike of racial mix-marriages,etc. But its mostly fear. Fear of the way they look,fear of the power(s) they have,etc. Unfortunately, some of these feelings are present in our world still. My brother knew and worked with a young man who was badly disfigured from being burned in a car wreck. No one at work would talk to him or sit with him at lunchtime,etc. Only my brother would talk to him,etc. My brother said that people were sometimes silly this way. You need to look past what you see and discover the person within. Anyway, good story.