rate_review Reviews

I loved your story, it was wonderfully written, the sex scene was awesome, and I can't wait for the sequel, but take all the time you need. I don't want you to feel rushed!

Oh wow, this story blew me away. I woke up too early this am and needed to go back to bed, but got hooked on your story and couldn't put it down. Thanks so much, can't wait to see more. Lots of work you put into this. Very sensual, and I felt you didn't need to defend your points of view, I could see the characters here and seemed reality based on how they would react. Lots of foreplay here, can't wait to see them finally consumate :)

Ask and you shall recieve. I was thinking about this fic earlier and how it was the best Kagome/Inu Yasha story I've ever read. I couldn't remember the name of it and here it is, for my reading pleasure.

I would LOVE an update on this. By all means, take your time! I firmly believe that when you force something out of you too early (regardless of the reason) you spoil it beyond repair. Think Star Wars Eposides I through III. George Lucas forced (no pun intended) them out too early, caving to fan demands and now we are stuck with three films that count on specail effects to carry them high enough so people don't notice the glaring plot holes and the absence of good dialoge. I've seen fics ruined the same way. Take your time, as much as you need. Anyone who truly appreciates your hard work will wait.

I am upset to hear you have health problems and I hope they aren't too serious and are overcome soon. Give an updated author's note or drop me an email and let me know how you are doing. Good luck!

Was 'mmm, mmm good, lollerz. It really a was an extremely well written piece, it pissed me off because it's practically ruined me for and other Inuyasha/Kagome stories I've read since; though I suppose that's a compliment. :P
So write faster,lol.

hwy i really loved the story. I wonder if you will finish it so that they do have sex? That would be pretty great plus inuyasha owes Kagome for going down on him. Please please continue the rest of the story. You are a pretty good writer. Thanks.

What can I say that properly hasn’t been said many times above.
That this story was absolutely brilliant ,the plot the detail, the interaction between Inuyasha and Kagome. I have only just introduced my self into the Fandom world of Inuyasha and it was so refreshing read a story like this on AFF.net. I was also sorry to here that someone had the nurve to plagiarise your work but then happy to see that it had been removed to bpdie should get credite for your work except you.
I hope that you do write a sequel to this or even another Inuyasha story, as there is no other story I have read like it .

dam u i just finished this story an unable to do a prober reveiw,u just wait till i get back from work .

Very interesting. I enjoyed this fic a great deal and I enjoyed the editorial, as well. You did a very good job of defending yourself. You are absolutely correct in your assertion that the Japanese have a much different outlook on sex than Americans. Some people would call us repressed. Personally, I think that the bonderies that we have in place are fine, with the exception that parents should do more to teach their children about sex instead of their peers. Anyway, back to the story review. It was well written and I think that it was not very out of character at all. Inuyasha has a very lonely soul inside of him. Kagome has a very compassionate one, though she can get a little ridiculous with the subdueing command. Inuyasha has a lot of pain to deal with and Kagome would be more than willing to try and ease that pain if the stubbourn hanyou would let her. Inuyasha also has a lot of pride. I see that getting in the way more than anything else. He fears that people will think that he is weak if he lets his emotions show, and what man wants to appear weak in front of a potential love interest. Anyway, keep up the good work and let me know when you write anything else. I look forward to your next effort. Just remember that what we the reader says really doesn't matter. Write for the love of writing and just enjoy the fringe benifits of an adoring public. :) Until the next time, Larry Nash AKA Fyrloche

Stupid plagarists, not even creative enough to write their own fanfics. Great story, by the way. I understand your excuse for the OOCness, but still believe that, givin the characters personalities, Kagome's modesty would have won out, and Inuyasha would have been more likely to tear apart half the forest than talk to the walls. But it makes for some nice results.
Please post another story (or update this one, but I got the impression that it was a one-shot- it may have even said it in the summary, I can't remember.). You're a very good writer, and actually have a brain and a knowledge of English grammar (sadly rare traits on this site). So if you write again, you'll probably be hearing from me. Cya!

I SOooooo have to bow to you for that awesome shutdown in your 'vital editorial' section. your story rocked...they cant help themselves;) You're my new idol. peace out.