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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must have more!!! Your writing is AWESOME!!! Please do more!!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those rewards were richly deserved. I completely agree with your arguement that this was in character, because that is exactly how Kagome would think, and a realistic way for Inuyasha to have reacted to the situation. It was an extremely well written story, which is hard to come by sometimes, and definitely an excellent example of how a good lemon should be. Fabulous job, I can't wait to see a sequel to this. ^_^
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is one GREAT story. i loved it, and you have a much greater vocab then some other authors i've seen. please write a sequel! this is too great to leave hanging open!
mika-chan -^_^-
mika-chan -^_^-
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just found your story...DAMN ITS BRILLIANT! I think I blushed during a few scenes...*blushes* But the raw emotion in this was truly heart felt...and I almost cried in the end when Kagome wondered if Inuyasha felt the same for her as she felt for him...It was a gorgeous first chapter and I hope there was a sequel!! :D Brilliant work and I'm sure to watch for more of your works!!
Jinx
Jinx
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH. That was amazing!!! Very well-written. I loved how timid they were at the beginning, and the end was great!! :)
Favorite quote: "Kiss good." HA! I must use that sometime...
Favorite quote: "Kiss good." HA! I must use that sometime...
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. In fact the only problems I had with it was first of all, Kagome did not leave with Inuyasha to see what the screem was about. It seems in her character to do that. Also I kept expecting them to be interrupted when the people in the inn heard them. But really those were the only things that bothered me. Good job with the writng and description.
~QueenTatooine
~QueenTatooine
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I think that you did a very good interpretaion of Inuyasha's knowledge or should I say the lack thereof. I imagine that he really wouldn't know a whole lot about it so that in my opinion made the story that much more believable.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
theyre making an inuyasha porno?
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. What a wonderful gift to us that read fanfictions. You just hit all the right emotions. You are a skilled word smith. Thank you for sharing your views and stories of the Inu world.