rate_review Reviews

I really do think you should review. It takes real talent to get someone’s attention to a story. Especially one like this, I thought it was well structured and very character like. I really do think Kagome would do that to InuYasha if time called for it. I also found the part about InuYasha and his features (claws, eyes etc...) To be very well thought out. It really got to me, knowing that people realize what InuYasha is. He really is the best of both worlds. To bad no one else can see it. The lemon I just have to say was fabulous, I found myself drawn completely into it. I could stop reading when Kagome first started kissing InuYasha. I was thrilled to see InuYasha and Kagome in that kind of position. I also, like the fact they didn't have sex. Because, the story would have just died if they did. Not saying you’re a bad writer. I just don't think having them have sex would have been a great thing. Maybe, in the sequel (if you decided to create one) But, alas you didn't make a sex scene and I think the story turned out great. Showing the relationship they have for each other and showing that InuYasha is just like all men out there (not talking about an asshole man) So, again think about making a sequel. I would read it; I'm sure a lot of people would read it and maybe create a mating scene in it.

wow that was so wicked omg it would ROCK my socks if there was a sequel soon lol man you have a lot of talent! ^_^

Thank god for the internet.... if this had been published (copyright issues not withstanding), and you were standing before me asking for my opinion? Not only would I be a quivering mess of fangirl lust, I'd also be totally speechless. Wow. This is the most wonderfully detailed and IN CHARACTER InuYasha smut I've ever read. Seriously. Holy shit! I've been writing smut in other fandoms for 10 years, and this has easily been one of the best ones I've read! And it's InuYasha.... please, you've GOT to write a sequel; however, being a writer myself, I understand when real life gets in the way. Whenever you're able, I'll eagerly snap up the sequel to this.

Just to let you know, after I read the story and saw the other three chapters, I yelped. Gleefully. Then I saw that they were editorials. I was disappointed, but only a little. Hey, I'm a fangirl, not a drama queen. Now if only I could convince you to write a Miroku smut.... shit, I don't think I'd be able to speak for days! :-D


Regards,
RodiSquall

one word...


WOW!

SEQUEL. NOW. That was one of the best lemons - hell, one of the best fics I've ever read. And I've read thousands, tens of thousands, in my time. I don't toss around compliments like that lightly.

Being a fellow author, I admire your writing style. I'll have to try some of your techniques myself...(not to say that I'm going to plagiarize, but the sincerest form of flattery is imitation, as you know.) I also enjoy the way you characterized Kagome. It seems very like her to give herself - her whole self, body and mind - to Inuyasha, just to try and heal him. Great stuff. Sexy as anything. Write a sequel with a real lemon inside, would ya? Also, I want to see Inuyasha trying oral. Being how his senses of scent and taste are heightened, well, think about it. Magnificence.

Gary Thunder

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! DO A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW!!!

I heard about this fic from Kristinsstudio.com and I must say...this is one of the best one-shots Ive ever read! Your ablity to capture the raw emotions...timidness, loving irritation...it's uncanny!! I'm so glad I ran into this fic!! The citrus in this story...wow...just sinfully delicious. I loved how you made InuYasha in character, yet took the plunge and made him vulnerable. Mad props to you!! I also really liked how you made Kagome dominant yet timid at the same time, interesting how you chose to do that. Most people (in the fics that I've read) either choose one or the other, and you did the perfect balance of both!! Two thumbs waayy up!!

VelvetNight

I thought this to be a wonderfully executed fic, and you stood by it well. *Bows and applauds* I look forward to the seguel.

Of course I want a sequel! That was awesome! Although next time hopefully they complete the deed.

Wow...Angelica...I'm speechless! Well, maybe not...

I was so pleased to learn this fic won the Fanguild Award. You did an incredbile job...as flawless in the writing style as in the characterization and believability factor!

And it's so nice to see Kagome portrayed with such depth, complete with 'modern-girl' emotions and a bit more of a backbone! Bravo to you! I could rave on and on about this wonderful story...but I'll shut up now! Needless to say I'm a new fan and look forward to reading more from you! Incredible story and it definitely made my heart-ache at a few points!

Wicked-Oni
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