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AHHHH!! How could you just leave it at that. O wow that was HOT! Please do a follow-up on this, I have to know what happens next.

I just came back to see how many more reviews you collected for your story, and saw you posted a second chapter. I read your editorial, and I'm slightly confused. Who was that for? I don't recall any one saying anything bad about your fic....?????????

Hey there. Great story and explanation. I'd love to see a sequel, though, since there are still emotional issue that Kag and Inu have to deal with.
Does he still love Kikyou? Now that he share something very special with Kagome, will his obligation to the dead miko change? I think Kagome should be repaid with something, more kindness at least, for willing to heal Inuyasha without thinking much about herself.

This was an absolutely woundeful story! It's one of the best i've read in a long time. Please consider continuing it!!

Sirenic Sprite: ^_~ No one insulted me, so no confusion. I honestly always have an editorial for my fics (I write in another fandom under a different alias). I tend to take the characters on whatever fandom I write to new places emotionally and as such I get lots of the same questions. It's much easier (and keeps me saner) to simply write up the thought process I go through while writing each fic and try to guess what the issues will be. That way if someone STILL disagrees with me, they can come to battle well-armed. I do so love C&C when it's articulate.

Hmmm....That's a good idea! I might have to adopt it. I have gotten a lot of argument on my fic....hmmm

I can't believe this hasn't gotten more reviews! I don't think people understand how important each review is, and how they alter your confidence. I posted a challenge, then answered my own challenge, so it's kind of awkward for me. It's hard to read each story, and write a story with similar content, without seeming like I stole someone elses ideas. But, it was my challenge, so I'm going to read every author's answer to it. I think this was very good. In this challenge, it's pretty hard to judge whether or not a character is OC, unless it's extremely over the top. You can't be too critical when the characters were never presented in this light before. As for your story... I think you did a good job at portraying them realistically for the most part. There were some areas I thought were a little OC, or unrealistic, like the number of orgasms and how her first time was oh so pleasureable, but that's just my own ideas. I really think you did them a justice. Good job!