rate_review Reviews

DAMN!! that was smoking hot!! i think i'm going to go take a shower now. a cold one. good lord, either you've got a great imagination or have gotten really really lucky! you've also got a lovely flair with words and descriptions. great job.

wow that was a extremely good written piece. the story i think was just wonderful. so could you maybe please write a sequel to this story. thanks!!

R: Two words, dude

Z: ......

R: Holy. Crap.

Z: *stunned*

R: Wow! This was a freaking good fanfic!

Z: ............

R: You even got Zee speechless. Holy CRAP!!!!

Z: ......................

R: I just hope she's alive.

Z: ...................................

R: and just wait for it....

Z: SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was definitely one of the best written fanfic works we've seen in a long time. We bow down to you! We're hoping for a continuation......hopefull the *ahem* conclusion. We hope you see you soon!

Ummm wow. Is there a possibility of a sequel for this fic ? Youa re one terrific author!

you know, I admire you, I really do. There aren't many authors who put so much thoughts in the characters, and you did that in every single way, it's incredible. Only for that you are already an incredible author. Not to mention your story. I didn't care how long it was, heck, I read your story till I was finished at 1.30 in the morning! I couldn't stop, and normally I don't have that much of a problem to stop reading and continue the next day, but with your story that wasn't possible.
Also, I absolutely loved how you pictured Inuyasha. Many seem to forget the fact, that as a hanyou, you aren't exactly loved by anyone. But you took this for your advantage, and it made perfect sense.
Kagome, too. She would be the one to help Inuyasha where she can.
As for a sequel, hell yes, I would highly suggest this! You could even make a story of it, in my opinion. I would love to see Kagomes fears now, how everything will change, if it will, how now Inuyasha would have to help Kagome with her fears.
You're an amazing author, and you should really continue with your great work! Don't hide any of them on your computer and just post them!

i just read, that you have written other stories on other pages... are you crazy girl?!?!?! post them here! or at least tell me where you posted your other stories! if they are as amazing as this one...

Wow! This is an amazing story - you feel for poor Inuyasha, you 'get' why Kagome does what she does, and at the end, they both get what they want. I'm glad that they didn't go all the way - it wouldn't have suited the main point of your story. You are a wonderful writer - I hope that you have your work on more than one site, to give it the maximum exposure that it deserves. I'm grateful to DQBunny (another wonderful writer - it's nice that she is in your corner) for pushing you to publish this piece. I look forward to more from you - and yes, a sequel would be nice.

This has to be one of the most well written fanfiction stories I've come across, and I've read... ALOOOOOT, very realistic like in the human psyche of emotions and such. and with the exact right amount of discription that you understood perfectly, without falling asleep, but also didn't jump from one point to another like alot of fics that go - They snog, have a quick shy factor, then decide to hump like rabbits with shooting stars everywhere. - It was well written, realistic, interesting and it flowed, everything needed for a great story that's enjoyable to read.

Very well written. Hope to see more from you. I think I would liked to have seen if they went back to their "norm" and how the villagers were dealt with in the morning. Although I know it is a one=shot and you had to cut it somewhere.

I just want to say: GO Angelina! I loved your justification, and I liked the story. Ptui on those who gave you crap, if any. You see it as likely, and it's just as likely as a lot of stuff I've seen (on this and other sites, and about this and other shows/comics/whatever). Your written defense was great, and frankly, I agree with most every word.