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that was *THE* best one shot Lemon I have EVER read on any site! So detailed and well written! WOW ^_^ ::blush::

Great story, I loved it! Very believable and very well written. May we please have a sequel? You did a great job on your characterization.
where are your other stories posted? I would really like to read them.

WOW! My oldest daughter said I would love this story, and she was right! You really grab the emotion of what prejudice, lonliness, and longing for acceptance can be for one who society thins is not worth being around. I understand that all to well. But the way you capture both their thoughts is really great. I also love the way you sought of blended Inuyasha's dream when Kagome "Sat" him awake. Really cracked me up. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Peace and Write On!

ACK! You have got to be kidding! That's all we get? ACK! *cough, cough* Sorry, I'm choking myself. Anyway, WHERE'S THE SEQUEL?! I WANT SEQUEL! This is too good NOT to have one. pwetty pwease?

That was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD!!! You -have- to write more!!! More more MORE!!! hehe.. seriously, awesome writing. I was completely absorbed in the story the entire time. That's a clear sign of great writing; when the reader feels like they're in another world! Great job!!! Write more!!! Oh and that stinks about the plagerism thing. I can't believe it happened so quickly. Some people really suck.

P.S. MORE!!!

so sorry to hear someone took your stuff! i DON'T understand why anyone over the age of 10 thinks thats okay? Ugh, I hope it never happens to me cause the day it does will be the day I take everything off all site, I am just to possessive of my writing which comes from my brain and my heart.

Anyway just wanted to say I was sorry to hear that

I really loved your story. I loved how you portrayed Inuyasha and Kagome. You put thought into your characters, of their reactions, personallities, and just eveything really. Stories like yours are the best their are, they put thought, detail, and do the research to make it like real life. I loved your senerio that you picked and I am very sorry and mad that someone would dare to steal your story and post it as theirs. My congrats on a wonderful story and my condolenses on the plagiarising.

yours truly
Jodie

I just have to say I was laughing my ass off reading that last authors note. Good burn. Seriously *Hands over the 'Wicked Burn' award* Kudos on the no crap taking.

STANDING F*CKING OVATION!!!!!! *claps* This is so freaking great absoluty freaking perfect ^_^

This was very well written and thought out. I really liked this story and how you got into thier thoughts and everything. I knew the age of consent was different I just didn't realize it was that different. I have spent time in Europe and my hubby is part Japanese and he has spent time there as well as Europe. Things are much different in those contries then they are in the states. I believe alot of times that people in the states are "prudes" LOL I also went to read the story that was stolen and I can not get to if on ff.net it is listed under the author's profile but when I click on it the story is not found. So they must have taken it down. This person has some other stories listed I wonder if they belong to them or if they "borrowed" those stories as well. Keep writing you do a wonderful job.