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for The Harsh Light of Day

by chevonne

schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh! i love the tension in this its very breathtaking! i really like this alot and i hope you update it soon! its also kind of comical in the sense of jaken even having some tension as well as the fact that they would rather burn in hell then pass up the opportunity of having her! its almost kind of helen of troy ne? really like it please update soon!!!
person Sabrina
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it, please update soon.
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe--I saw my name.---That had to be one of the most sensual chapters I have ever read.--I love the way you write. That was very erotic, so wonderfully done. You could feel and picture his desire for her.

Wonderful job once again.

~Tainted~
person SweetiePie
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet mercy! You floored me, cringees and shudders. You got me!
person Kaniscrew
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Twisted but very good!!! You floored me!
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAH I freaking loved this! What an unusual story this was great and very amusing:)
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! For me!! (tackle glomps)..This is soo sweet!!! I absolutely love it!! Ohhs holy hell ..that was so hot, and then soo umm……… (snicker) I choked on mah coffee at the end!! (x,x‘) .. I have got to add this one to my recommended reads… Priceless just priceless.. I love stories like this, that really throw you for a loop!! Wonderful job Kitty!! (huggles)
person Rawben
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O you so got me!!!!!!!! it was jaken!! omg! lol.... oh man... anyhow, what the hell does he look like? this is AU... so maybe he isnt ugly. but damn. that was funny. ;)