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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I SO LOVED IT!!! WAIT!! DON'T LEAVE IT THERE!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! Are you gonna continue this??? Please?????UPDATE!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I really enjoyed this fic. Very offbeat and not a generic Inuyasha/Kagome fic. Excellent writing and grammar as well. Yay!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope there's more to this because it has the potential to be really sweet. I like your idea, it's brilliant, original as far as I know, I want to see more, like who's the father of kikyo's kid and such, please, you can't leave it like this!!!
Wishing for an update!!!
Wishing for an update!!!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As a one shot this was perfect. I loved it and would love to read it if you made it into a chaptered story.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really good... id like to read another chapter or two... or more....
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the best stories I have read. You were certainly right about sexual tension. I think the fact that there are no actual love scene after the movie is better because it leaves the readers to think for themselves how hot these two are gonna get with each other.
Good job all around. There are not too many fic with Kikyou and Kagome in good terms around here. And Sesshoumaru is asexual? Go figure ^_^
Good job all around. There are not too many fic with Kikyou and Kagome in good terms around here. And Sesshoumaru is asexual? Go figure ^_^
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! miroku made a porno flick and didn't even know it ^_^ i know you said one shot, but PLEASE just give a little more ^_^ your a great writer
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know you set this up to be a one of deal but the way you left it would be a good way to start a full lengh story. which would be something i would quite like to read