AFF Fiction Portal
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I told ya you could continue, ya should anyway..

Can't recall anymore and if I haven't... here it is.. KEEP GOING!!
person Iyasu
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think you should continue it. It sucked me in with its wonderful imagery. I love your use of description. Please continue it?
person HimeAndi
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot! I've been reading but I had to sneak online to do so, and had no time to review...

*whimper* dont stop it now... damn I want to read more! Its so interesting and I love your style, very spohisticated!

Please?
person The G
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, if it helps any, I enjoyed reading your fiction. I would like to see more, but if your busy, thats understandable.
I would like to take a moment and explain the vast majority of viewers to you for a moment. I can do so in one word: Horny.
They may greatly enjoy a story, but not review it do to more...Urgent buisness. So, while one cannot expect as many reviews as one would like, know that your story is enjoyed, and bask in the hit counter mark.
person Kiranta
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on! Don't discontinue it, it's getting good!
person Anony Viewer
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, when I read Yasha's challenge, I figured most of these stories were not going to be all that great. Thanks for proving me wrong. You have a pretty good story in progress. I think it's a shame that you fee like not enough people are interested in your story. Hopefully you'll feel the desire to start writing again, and can finish this story.

Good luck in your future endeavors KR.
person Valdimarian
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont believe it! You leave it at a cliffhanger like that and you dont get enough interest??? I'm shocked and ashamed at my fellow AFF readers!
person ducusdraconis
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find the story kind of interesting and would like to see were you take it.
person Radish
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does the challenge require Sango get in on the action, or can it (and more importantly would it in your story) be just Inuyasha and Kagome? If Sango gets involved then bleh, tasteless, I won't care if you quit. But if not then please continue, if just to break the pattern of all the ridiculous SangoxKagomexInuyasha responses.
person VoidPheonix
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoy your story alot it would be a shame if was discontinuedgood job bye the way