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for Let Me Be Your Downfall

by Aubs

schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. i like it. no words needed, just comfort. very kawaii!! keep it up great story!!!
person littleolmee
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was your first? you did very well. it is well written and constructed. hope you finish it, will be looking forward to it.
person IamReven
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! I completely agree about this song being perfect for Inuyasha and Kagome. I've been a devoted Matchbox Twenty fan for years, but had never really thought about Inu and Kags in that context. I,m glad you reposted this. Please update soon!
person inugirl2005
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! very beautifully written, please continue!
person NewKitty
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it was bad at all. I like it. A break from all the angsty fics I've been reading lately. I'll be looking for the next chappies. I have to ask: why do you not think very highly of this?
person FayeMegan
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! very good! please continue... and maybe some dialouge?
person chanda
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LIKED IT!!!! I cant wait for the update.
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a very nice writing style. Not as tight as the potential shows, but still, nice. Not a fan of songfics. But nice incorperation. Forgive the spelling errors, I don't have a spell check.


Matthew.
person Kat
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! It's VERY good!!!! PLEASE update tomorrow!!!! :)
person Reviewer
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. I'm glad you're updating tomorrow. I want to read more.