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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pretty cool. I like the lemon! it's dignified.
That's how i like to do mine too, not too overly...
um, cliche, not too metaphorical, and definitely not
'ghetto' or wranchy. . . but still gets the point
across...
Hope to read more stories from you soon!
just a clue though, you might want to reiderate some
of the words you use... example being... you say breath when
i think.. i'm pretty sure you mean BreathE other than that
this is nicely written. But a writer's editing is never
really done is it. lol
I hope you'll check out some of my stories and comment
me as well! I'm sure you will like them if this is the kind
of lemon you enjoy.
That's how i like to do mine too, not too overly...
um, cliche, not too metaphorical, and definitely not
'ghetto' or wranchy. . . but still gets the point
across...
Hope to read more stories from you soon!
just a clue though, you might want to reiderate some
of the words you use... example being... you say breath when
i think.. i'm pretty sure you mean BreathE other than that
this is nicely written. But a writer's editing is never
really done is it. lol
I hope you'll check out some of my stories and comment
me as well! I'm sure you will like them if this is the kind
of lemon you enjoy.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it was like reading a harlaquin romance. I loved it. I just wanted to let you know too, that I was actually afraid to put up my work as well. My first Inuyasha fanfic was Desires of the heart. My friend was like, dang girl, put that story up. Again, I didn't listen but I wrote another one called Love Only Me and she nearly pounded me in my head and demanded that I find a web site to post my stories. Then I found this one. I felt comfotable and I gave it a try. So, I understand what you mean by being nervous. But, keep writing kay.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One:
Wow. The angst is tremendous. Aside from a few easily corrected errors, you have excellent writing skills. He went back. Yay! Oh, I hope it wasn't a dream. On to chapter two.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Wow. The angst is tremendous. Aside from a few easily corrected errors, you have excellent writing skills. He went back. Yay! Oh, I hope it wasn't a dream. On to chapter two.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two: That was so romantic. I enjoyed it very very much.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three: I swear I had tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat. That's what you wanted, right? Job well done!
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That just made me happy! A good feeling deep inside my chest.
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You didn't disappoint a bit with the lemon!!! It was WONDERFUL!!!!
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Very ... poetic in a sort of ways.
I'll be waiting for chapter three!
^-^ Lizzy-chan~
I'll be waiting for chapter three!
^-^ Lizzy-chan~
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! PLZ FINISH IT I EVEN SAVED IT ON MY INUYASHA STORYS FILE I ONLY PUT MY FAVS IN IT! GREAT STORY MY MOUTH WAS VERY DRY AFTER READING THIS!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Im glad you put the story up again, cuz I didnt see if before and I liked it. So, you said you had more ?