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for Another Side to the Story

by Wheezambu

person DEEP SERENITY
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh that was pretty good I LOVE miroku bad Kagome! LOL
person XRaven
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha/Sango
Now that’s really hot
Miroku/Kagome
Somehow just not.

...I think you just proved yourself wrong, a couple of times over. *turns on the AC*

person AttemptedSeduction718
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright! One of my most fav alternate pairings of all time! I adored the wanton Kagome..(we all know she had it in her) Couldn't ask for a better one-shot of these two. The only problem was my ice cream melting from the sheer hotness of your story. ^^
person HN
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*offers to have your babies* I am the most utterly spoiled beta in the world! That was hot, Bu. I loved that Kagome wasn't passive, and when Miroku decided to take control it made me go "guh". The part where he leans over her and demands she admit in words that she wants him to fuck her made my inner smut!addict squee. And the plot, hee. "Why do you think Inuyasha and I fight so much?" Yes, why indeed. *loves* I owe you for this!
person whirleeq
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheezy.. you rock. that was just great... *fans herself*... LOL ;) It was really, really funny too. I just loved how smutty and forward you wrote Kagome. So sick of her being portrayed as an 'innocent good girl'... This was great!