rate_review Reviews

THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST YOAI FICS I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME, SO GOOD IN FACT THAT IT WAS ALL MOST SINFULLY EVIL....OOH I HOPE THAT YOU ADD A THIRD CHAPTER TO THIS FIC SOON, MABY SOMETHING ALONG THE LINES OF...OH I DON'T KNOW MABY KAGOME FINDING OUT, AND MABY THE THREESOM HAVE A MENAGE A TWA....OR SOMETHING ALONG THE LINES....YA DON'T HAVE TO USE THIS IDEA IF YA DON'T WANT TO THOUGH, IT'S TOTALY UP TA YOU THAT IS....ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K.

read it again and it's just too good. love the inuyasha and miroku (big yaoi and smut fan) and all the other odd pairings you could have in there if you decide to continue every odd pairing (because i just love odd inuyasha pairings) except any of that rin/sess crap please continue!

much encouragement,
blood-red.

lol, another great story, and truthfully in certain situations I can see miroku being with a man, I think of him as being very sexual

OH God this is hot! The whole time I was thinking, "Oh God, are they going to do anal? Oh boy, yes there are..."
It was great. Kagome and Inuyasha were a bit OOC but it's hard to pull off a quick lemon like this and be totally in character.
It's not like it couldn't HAPPEN, right?
I will say this, I'm glad you wrote Miroku the bitch for once. It seems that Inuyasha is always the bitch in doujinshi. This is a nice twist that Miroku was sorta put off initially by Inuyasha's advances.
I love you! You wrote my favorite yaoi pairing. So hot! And your descriptions were very well done!
This story just begs for a hot hentai drawing don't you think?
XD

i love unusual parings like kagome and miroku or pairings like kagome and sesshomaru (<-hint, hint!) and i absolutly love yaoi inuyasha pairings and you got it all in this story so please keep your pairings unusual for i'm really not a fan of the traditional pairings exept for like miroku and sango and even then it's a little iffy but other than that no. especially when people pair sesshomaru with rin when in the show she's just a kid and if she did grow up in sesshomaru's care i just don't see them having feelings besides father and daughter but i can't say any thing for it is fan-FICTION, wait, i'm getting carried away aren't i? ne ways please update if you'll continue this story because it is a very refreshing and good story. also because i just love my smut!!!!

OMG...you should write more yaoi. I thought you were a gen only writer since I've never seen your stuff in yaoi category. It is so fucking hot and Inu is wonderfully in his character. So is Miroku. Yes, I command you to write another chapter with Miroku as seme. I need it!

wow thats amazing im speechless i love miroku and kagome

WHEW!!!! I'm going to have to take a cold shower now!!!! :)

very nice one shot!.. kinda bittersweet ending... but very good!

This is a great steamy one-shot. Not my favorite pairing, but you made it deliciously enjoyable.