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lol, I didnt read the first chapter but the second was definately my cup-o-tea. Loved it. Keep up the good work and update soon. Love to see Mirokus turn.

OK, I really liked that second chapter. Good pacing, and characters still remained true to form. You do good lemon!!

throw in a threesome

Well this fic was fun, even though you kinda made miroku the official whore of the group. I also thought Inuyasha was a bit OC because hes so thick-headed(sounds wrong doesn't it ^,^), but its okay making him a pervert was a good idea. Overall I enjoyed your story, so keep writing and i'll keep reading. Thats all I got to say since I hate making long reviews.

sorry but I forgot 2 tell you about how I laughed about how Kagome is so 'innocent' ^_^. She sounds like me, except when I want something I get it right away, I dont beg for it I demand it. SO THERE!

That was so hot! Now all we need is a threesome!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Wow. That was a lot better than I anticipated. **laughs** I read the first chapter some time back and completely forgot (didn't expect a second chapter all). When I saw the second chapter was yaoi, I was a little skeptical (though admitedly curious). And I certainly wasn't disappointed. I thought it was very well written and the characters didn't seem to OOC as to be ridiculous. After all, no matter what, I think Miroku will always like women...but I also think he'd be curious and adventurous enough to try new things. Inuyasha, as rough and gruff as he usually is, does have a softer side so it makes sense that he'd be a conisderate lover. His (Inuyasha, that is) reasoning also made sense. His track record with women hasn't exactly been encouraging.

All in all, I enjoyed this chapter (what I'm calling in my mind a "bonus" chapter **grinz**).

Keep up the great work.

^_^x

Chiruken

I just realized, while reading this story for maybe, the third or fourth time (second chapter at least....but I think I read the first one twice) that I might not have reviewed it yet. And, surprise, surprise, I hadn't! So, here it is! This story is very effective at getting me pleasantly aroused, I must say. ^_^ Yes, XRaven, yes! I love that review! Oh, and by the way, that poem (so cute!) had definetly helped me realise the Sango/Inuyasha chemistry. Woo boy! But, what I wanna know is, how come you haven't done any stories with them as a pairing, hmm? Well, at least, none that I have read (That'd be so hot!). I think something I thought a long time ago was on how casual this piece was, the second part, at least...That's mostly what I'm reviewing here....^_^;; It tickled me so! Laughter, sexual banter, horny jokes all around (and lots of dirty talk too!)! ^_^ Heh heh....Anyways....Yes! Yes, quirkyslayer! There should be a hot hentai drawing of this! Doesn't everyone think so?!?!?! I was reading it and thought that too! And yes, SHADOW and bayusandiw, the next one should be a three-some! I thought that while reading this, as well! UHHHHHHH, all these reviewers are reading my mind...! Or....telling the future, considering the reviewed before me....@_@ But I do want one with Miroku as seme......and I feel this should only be a three-piece story, not four...unless a certain taijiya happened to come into the gang's picture....~_^ Aaaaahhh, it would be a crazy ongoing, kinky, gender-don't-matter, unusual pairing story! Ha ha! ^_^;;; Sorry................................Anyway.....What I was thinking was maybe some Miroku/Inuyasha action with Miroku as seme and then Kagome might just run in on them and....duh duh duh! Three-some! Hee hee...Kagome might be coming back from her time and find them or they had snuck off somewhere, or........I don't know...-_-;; The ending to the first chap was so....so...."awwwww-ish," with the whole "beautiful demon slayer" part. I think I was kind of squeeling and saying "Sango! Sango!" or whatever when I first read the first chapter. Anyway, maybe just ponder my ideas.....maybe, just maybe....-_-;; Continue to write stories that make horny beasts like me satiasfied (Heh heh, just kidding, ^_^;; but seriously, your fics are hot!) !

the next would be Inu/Kag/Mir yaay... keep the juice flowin' uh-uy

Please tell me that you're going to write a third chapter to this.