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for The Spider and the Dog

by neffinesse

person Kiotana
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol That was fun, Sesshy-1, Naraku-0
person Cacao
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, that wasn't too bad. I've been finding a lot of bad ones lately.
It was sort of funny, some I didn't get too much.
person dami
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it<3 the last line won a 5 star rate ^.^
person Littlefiction
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This, Bamboo Encounter, and Dirty Talk are my favorite Sesshoumaru/Naraku stories on aff.net. I love the way everything is a mind game with them, and they're always struggling for control, even when they're just "talking". And I love the way there little game is mentioned in each, except that circumstances tip the advantage slightly in each, giving a totally different reaction, yet still very obviously the same person. Very well written. Of course, the sex was also very well written.
person Damnedxxx
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Give me more, more, more please please plase I read all three stories but I want more!
person Hanyou Slave
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is hot and funny at the same time. You did an excellent job with the innuendo. The way this is written doesn't make Sess and Naraku OOC. I'm surprised. Great job. Now I'm off to read your sequels.

Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall
person Cherry Sakura
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! >.< I love this fic...this is only my third time reading about a fic with this pairing but out of the three this is my fav!!! WOOH!! ^^ Your a fantastic writer!!! ^_^
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. That was...beautiful. ^^

I do so enjoy the slightly-pyschotic Naraku (O.o Though come to think of it, he kind of...has to be, no?) Sesshoumaru was wonderfully in character (I suppose I can see him saying that certain filthy line, in this context) and together they are, well...very hot.

And boy do I like to see out-of-control Fluffy.
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hotness....I love it! Sessh and Naraku make quite a sexy couple.
person Kira
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty entertaining, you ought to consider writing more along the lines of this with this pairing.
You write really well, and there are few who can make this pair work and keep them in character. Nice job!
~Kira