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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please countinue i love this couple
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. Can't wait for the next chapter. This is my first time reading a Sess/Kik fanfic... PRETTY COOL...
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Another Sess/Kik I'm so happy that the pairing is becoming famous oh please update soon I want to see more and don't just leave it on lime make some lemons.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, first redo your spacing, it makes it easier to read. I think the idea of this story is interesting, I am assuming the next chap will be you going back and telling us how you got together, as long as you explain how they changed(show it through different events and time) then you can do it. right now though Sess smiling freely is out of his basic personality(and doesn't fit the time of story, would be more believiable in a AU) but again if you show readers how be got to the point where he smiles freely and teases Rin then it's okay
don't worry if people slam your story just work with your idea and led us and show us how it could come to be.
don't worry if people slam your story just work with your idea and led us and show us how it could come to be.