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for Come Sweet Death

by shylust

schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. You had me in tears during the first chapter. I'm glad Koga and Inu got together. Fuck Kag and the others! I wonder who the mysterious person is? The lemon was very hot too. The only suggestion I would give you is to either have someone proof read your text or you give it a really good read through. There were a lot needless mistakes that I think you probably could have caught by giving the story a quick once though. ^_^ But very nicely thought out plot.
person Sesshysfavhuman
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am glad you posted here instead of ffn you know how much i love this story its so romantic and sweet Keep up the good work i like the song you picked too
person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is great. you poted your story here. i am so happy *does a happy dance*, and the lemon was good. keep writing, you're going great.
person liz
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOOD STORY, LOVED IT UPDATE SOON, IS THIS AN M-PREG OR A SIMPLE YAOI?
person poppy
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice fic, plz continue

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